The waltz

Old poem with a proper edit??

The Waltz

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
The ocean and love create emotions and passion that stay with us forever.”

The waltz 

(Was publish in small press, many moon ago.)

We were doing a waltz upon the beach.
 The waves were the orchestra and
 the wind was whispering a love song to us.

 I tossed her into a twirl and
 I brought her back to me.

 By the light of the moon.
 Two lovers danced the movement of freedom
 and celebrating being alive.

I whispered to her. “Marcella, Marcella, let’s make this day last forever.”

 We come back to the ocean after each journey.
 The ocean keeps our secrets.

The dancing waves are always waiting.

  She was as beautiful as when I first saw her
  and I held her like she was my last breath.

 Two shadows upon a naked beach.
Doing the dance of hope and freedom.

 The cold of winter is surrounding us.
We warm each other with laughter and dancing.

 Two friends, lovers  and travelers who come to celebrate being alive.
Peace for a moment for two people who love the road.

 We find each other at the end of our journeys.
Two wanderers in search of peace.

  I love you my beautiful  Marcella

                   COYOTE    
                  1996

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Coyote, your poetry always sings songs of love and passion so sweetly. Once read, always remembered. The photo and imagery of lovers dancing on the beach are simply amazing. "We come back to the ocean after each journey.
The ocean keeps our secrets." How iconic and incredibly evocative are these lines. Your words wash the mind with music and salty sea spray. Brilliant, always.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Annette and thank you for reading and the comment. I need a year near the Pacific.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Me too dear Coyote!:))

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Woww such a romantic sensational poem and i was admiring how you depicted the waltz of the waves and the rest of the imagery and muse so so so awesome!!! Kudos, its such poetic delight to read yours always.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my kind friend. I appreciate the kind words and the comment.

[Betty Hermelee]

You speak a lot about being alive, freedom, peace; the ocean seems to soothe; and at the same time gives you music by which to dance and celebrate your lives together. You both like to journey, yet return to that same familiar place of peace. Well done! Vivid images!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Betty. We need places where we can know peace.

[Betty Hermelee]

That’s for sure!

[Kay/Hayden]

So much passion and sweet romance! Beautiful "sing-song" flow!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Kay/Hayden. When love find us. Make the days last forever.

[Sami Khalil]

Excellent poetry Coyote. Very romantic and fulfilling to lovers of all genre. You keep the passion alive and well even in your memory. I think you are a world traveler and lover.

[Sami Khalil]

"I brought her back to me.

By the light of the moon.
Two lovers danced the movement of freedom
and celebrating being alive"

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sami for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Sami Khalil]

Any time. You are welcome sir Coyote...

[Cherrie Palmer]

A waltz across time, just like the dance this poem is intimate, beautiful and a treat to read.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Cherrie. I appreciate the comment.

[T.S. Ulmus]

What a beautiful twist of metaphor you crafted and I had to pour through it. I've written a few love poems myself and this one is heart tugging. I can't help but note that if her name was macarena the poem would read a little bit differently.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. A very old poem.

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So beautiful! You paint the town (beach) red with love, passionate love. Like the line'i held her like last breath'. Two romantic soul in the beach... Can't be more poetic than this.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my ..... Mr. Coyote Man .. stunning poetry .. so emotive .. i am swept up in the tide and blown away .. precious moments captured so real .. best one yet of yours sir .. in my opinion ..
E.

[Coyote Poetry]

I appreciate the kind words my friend. I hope you are doing well, being safe.

[Einstein Noodle]

i am John ... and back at ya! :)

[barleygirl]

As always, your poem expresses a ton of feeling & affection thru vivid imagery. Great depiction of dancing -- my favorite line about dancing ever: " I tossed her into a twirl and I brought her back to me." Congrats for getting this into a literary journal! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Margie. The old poetry I wrote. Now seem like another life.