If you go away...

Some words.

If you go away

We didn’t know,

kind love was near,

we didn’t know.

Love blossom like a flower,

appeared in the Spring of our life and

can be forgotten in the Fall of our life.

 

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If you go away,

can our wintry wings find our way back home to love salvation?

If you go away,

will you remember me?

If you stay with me,

we could create a epic tale,

where lover’s whispers are sung to the stars,

where the lover’s splendor are written upon the nightly sky.

Please stay with me,

please obey the lover’s call to the salvation to keep alive,

the safety of love embrace and love, sweetest kiss.

 

 

Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i am reminded of a scene in the movie "Last of the Mohicans" when he says to his love...
"no matter what it takes and no matter how much time, I will find you"
if the love is true enough...the distance will be overcome....the time in between visits will be overcome...the memory of it will be so strong that it will remain no matter how long it has to wait.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jacob. Real love tattoos our hearts forever.

[Hayllie]

I have to agree with Jacob..with this beautifully written piece I was instantly taken to The Last Of The Mohicans. Such a beautiful and inspiring movie about precious love as is your fantastic writing! Thank you for this....Now I recede to go watch one of my favorite movies!! :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Hayllie. I must re-watch the movie. I watched many years ago.

[Hayllie]

It is absolutely one of my favorites! Its such an inspiring movie....and absolutely a MUST see!!

[light and ashes]

This is just beautiful Coyote..

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Allie for reading and the comment.

[light and ashes]

You're welcome Coyote. I'm a big fan of your work.

[Carola]

wonderfully soft & romantic words coyote, loved your poem.

"appeared in the Spring of our life and
can be forgotten in the Fall of our life."
yes, old age doesn't really have much going for it. husbands, wives & friends die-off or family forgets you in their busy life.

i noticed a typo in the line.... "we could create a epic tale,"
it would read better making the 'a' into an 'an' --> an epic tale

cheerio carola

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and for the help. I appreciate the comment dear Carola.

[Unspoken poet]

I feel a certain depth in this write, this is really good

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear poet. I appreciate the kind words.

[Neville]

when in love, even the thought of being alone is unthinkable and leaves one feeling broken.... you convey the same depth of feeling here in these well delivered words.. this plea, this prayer Dancing Coyote sir

Neville

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Neville. Keeping love alive is hard work.

[Neville]

indeed the hardest..

[Rye]

we could create a epic tale,
where lover’s whispers are sung to the stars,
where the lover’s splendor are written upon the nightly sky.

Awesome lines here, this is so lovely. enjoyed the read

[Coyote Poetry]

My attempt at short poetry and thank you dear Rye for reading and the comment.

[Papaya]

Super romantic, Coyote. The words really pull.
Nice one.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Ana and thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Papaya]

My pleasure. :)

[Corset]

mesmerizing, this...dance of yours :) heavy sigh...lovely words of love Coyote! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Corset for reading and the comment. I do appreciate the kind words.