Someone like you

Just words.

                           Someone like you

I told her,

I was bleeding, I was dying.

You, my love, my savior.

You honored me,

blessed me with the gift of your sweet love.

I have been loving you since your beautiful hazel eyes made me see,

the stars, the moon and the miracle of your beautiful smile.

Someone like you,

made empty life, behold love, that could be so sweet, so wonderful.

You are my ambrosia,

my elixir of sweet honey wine and you allowed my poetic heart,

 be able to sing the praise of a lady, 

who enchante my life,

my heart.

                  Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Some words.

Reviews

[gram linski]

Tender sweet poetry for your true love, not many men have the balls to talk so freely about emotions, written with style and panache and passion, thanks for your poets soul and your... what's that other thing, ah yes, just words,

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend. I appreciate the comment.

[Lea Sheryn]

Putting romance into words is a wonderful gift. Your words are touching.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lea, I appreciate the comment.

[Lea Sheryn]

You're welcome. I enjoyed reading your work.

[Laurierose]

I'm a sucker for romance, and this did the trick! The description of the ambrosia alone is as sweet as the love described from the glimpse of a smile. This is a beautiful write, my friend. Great read.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Laurierose. I appreciate the comment.

[Chris Shaw]

You are such a romantic Coyote. I am wondering why more men choose to be macho rather than romantic? You always appreciate women, the women you have met as you have traversed the path of life. I thank you for that.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

Women like to laugh and talk. I do believe and thank you dear Chris for reading and the comment.

[Chris Shaw]

I think you are right. Laughter is especially important, talking too. Talking about things that matter instead of the football results or the next visit to the pub:)

[Neville]

the miracle of a beautiful smile always does it for me Coyote, yes that and the eyes my friend... fine words and true.....

Neville

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Neville for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John... like the hands of time... you pen romantic overtures
with sensual persuasion... as the world needs desire and passion to
create a tradition of love and devotion. truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Pat. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another very romantic write from a true romantic heart. You always inject such passion and down to earthiness into all your writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you John. I appreciate the comment.