No mas amor

Just words

                          No mas amor

My velvet and silk dream,

we danced by the Florence Summer moon.

The star lit the sky and

our feet moving to the sweet song.

I whispered to her,

you love the tango more than me.

She brought her body near and she whispered.

You promise me dancing, sweet words and no promises.

I want to fall into you with no payment due.

No mas amore dear lover.

Let's paint a Hemingway night,

dance till three,

make love by the river.

Be brave, not prisoners.

I told her,

your wish is my command.

We have Florence,

the good wine and the long night.

You and I.

We shall be greedy and we will steal kisses and dance till we can't no-more.

Pretty lady smiled, wrapped her legs tightly around my legs.

The moon smiles and the stars danced with.

Two people do the dance of sensuality,

the tango of love wild, love free.

                            Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Neville]

If ya got to dance... there is no other way to do it but wild and free and with love a plenty... oh that pretty lady is something special aint she just... and all danced away in one of my favourite Italian Cities... a super poem without any doubt at all.... Cheers Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Neville. I need a month in Florence.

[Neville]

Me too my friend.. I really do love that place...

[Rye]

Oh wow! I love the Tango!
This write is so very good

Let's paint a Hemingway night,
dance till three,
make love by the river.
Be brave, not prisoners.

Love this part so very much too, Let's paint a Hemmingway night.
Love that, ...Nicely done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ryanna. All of need, some Paris nights.

[Gerald Parker]

May I offer these words? You seem to have set your poem in Italy. The tango is not a dance we associate with Italy. Or is there a Florence in Argentina? If your poem really is set in Italy, the Italian for 'No mas amor' is 'Niente più amore.'

[Coyote Poetry]

Can tango in Michigan. Just the dance of amor. Florence in Italy. Dance is international. Thank you Gerald for reading and the comment.

[Gerald Parker]

Yes, the tango can be danced at the North Pole or up Mount Etna but "No mas amor" is not right if you use the town Florence in your poem. What's also in need of remedying is your mix of Spanish 'no mas' with Italian 'amore' in stanza 5.

[Lyn Anderson]

So lovely. I like this progression of your poetry. Subtle, sweet, and totally you. Would you ever speak your poems for us to hear?
One minor suggestion: I would either say can't no more or cannot anymore, depending on whether you want to go for colloquial speak or grammatically correct

[Coyote Poetry]

I do verbal poetry. Some YouTube. I will post two today on the W.C. I have done poetry readings since 1986. Attempting YouTube. Thank you Lyn for reading and the help. I do appreciate.

[Jade]

This is such a lovely write here. Enjoyed this and the pics used

[Coyote Poetry]

A great song and thank you Brandie for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.