In the field of perfection

Perfect place, rarely knowns.

In the field of perfection

I wished upon the first star of the new night,

I wished for warm Spring days,

good drink, long days and warm kisses.

I want to drink in your beauty through my blessed eyes,

I want my fingers to dance in the grace of your soft hands,

I want us to lay in the field of wonder.

Us, watching the clouds and knowing.

We have everything we need.

Just you and I, in the field of sweet dreams.

         Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Gorgeous, so pretty and airy and light. I am impressed with the honing of your skills and the deepening of your poetic voice.
One small thing, it would be more correct to use lie instead of lay (lie in the field of wonder) and as a bonus, it would tie in beautifully with your last lines, just you and I

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lyn for reading and the help. I do appreciate.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Perfectly ethereal poem and image. Pristine in its innocence, lyrical in form and flow. “ I want my fingers to dance in the grace of your soft hands”- sensual, tender imagery like white roses petals moist with dew. You take us away with the purity of your passion Coyote. Thank you so much for your beautiful words.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Annette. I appreciate the kind words.

[NotUsinganymore]

Very romantic and nice poem! i enjoyed it a lot c:

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you JungLee. I appreciate the comment.

[Ryan I]

This is so sweet and you created a magical feeling, a bliss feeling, a feeling of love. Thank you for sharing! I enjoyed this!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ryan. I appreciate the comment.

[Jade]

This is so beautiful, and so loving, Nicely written and well expressed

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Brandie. I appreciate your kind words. You are always very kind.

[Rye]

This is such a lovely and wonderful write, like your pic you used for this write

[Coyote Poetry]

The pretty photo gave me reason to write and thank you Ryanna for reading and the comment.