Just a little bit more

Just words

                          Just a little bit more

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"Candy is sweet, lemons can be tart and life is long."

Pretty woman whispered in the field of the Spring dandelions to me.

"We have known hell's kiss and the devil's dance.

We have learn. The day is long and the nights are longer, when we are alone.

We have played the lovers, we have played the fool.

Maybe we can play kind lovers, maybe we can teach each other.

Love is sweet, love is wonderful."

I brought the pretty lady closer and I told her.

Just a little bit more my dearest love.

Hold be closer, hold me sweetly and maybe.

We can learn.

The hard days, the hard nights were to lead us to the meadow of dandelions.

Love is chance and great luck.

Maybe, you and I. Can know some luck.

Pretty woman kissed me long and sweetly. She whispered.

"Let's ride out the storm and you and me.

Can swim to the point where lovers are content.

Have enough."

A blessed May-day. Two people, holding hands and talking little.

Watched the dandelions dance and living on a wish and a prayer for love caress.

                           Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Jade]

Pretty woman kissed me long and sweetly. She whispered.
"Let's ride out the storm and you and me.
Can swim to the point where lovers are content.
Have enough."

I enjoyed this part, you write with lovely imagery and detail. I enjoyed your write throughly

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Brandie. I am thankful for your kind words.

[Jade]

not a problem at all Mr. Coyote

[The Iron Horseman]

Happy words, my friend. I guess you found love that day. And you are right, love is indeed chance and great good luck. Those who find it are truly blessed. A lovely paean to a beautiful lady. Most enjoyable.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I did find love for a time and I appreciate the comment.

[The Iron Horseman]

You are most welcome.

[Fran Marie]

I like the " we have known hell's kiss and the devils dance..
yet just a little more..such a lovely image of
love and sticking with it through thick and thin
Just so beautifully penned as always

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Fran. Hard days make the good days better.

[Fran Marie]

you're welcome my friend

[john l smith]

I see two lovers lying side by side, on their backs, in the sun, in a remote field of dandelions, where absolutely nothing else matters.
Dave B

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Dave, we need the wildflowers field dreams.

[Robert Trakofler]

hey warn a guy next time this made me cry before the second stanza finished. Christ i need some tissues, I am constantly amazed at the writing i encounter on this site. Powerful emotion comes thru in these lines you make it a very personal feel to this audience. Thank you for sharing this. and please put a disclaimer on the top of this poem or a warning label at least

[Crowley]

I love your relaxing rhythm and the way you lay out the world before us. This was as it should happen, and a beautiful heart writes beautiful words. Loved this coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

So much more than just words Coyote. This is a song of sweet love and passion that dances across the page. The pretty woman and the passionate man gently moving to love’s refrain. I think of Roberta Flack singing “Killing Me Softly With Your Song”....my heart and the dandelions join you in this dance my friend. Beautiful write.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Annette. Best days is when love is near.

[Suhd]

Beautiful idea and words even more beautiful. Inspiring stuff, John.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Suhd for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.