I thought I reviewed this collection already. I love ten word contests. They make us strip away all the fluff and create pure image and or emotion, which you have done here.
My favorite maybe the last however if not that one the first is a photo finish second.
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6 Years Ago
Thank you you Cherrie. I am glad you liked. I appreciate the comment.
These are fantastic. Keeping poems short and succinct is something I really struggle with, and you've done a marvelous job of compacting large topics into tiny works of art! I would say the repetition of 'skin' in the third poem is a little jarring, but I think it's use in the first line could be easily substituted with something equally poignant, maybe 'I wrote with fingers'??? Beautiful, powerf1ul work nonetheless!
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6 Years Ago
Thank you Patrick and I agree. Hard to write meaningful short poems and thank you for the help. I ap.. read moreThank you Patrick and I agree. Hard to write meaningful short poems and thank you for the help. I appreciate the comment.
This is the perfect collection of short poems. They all go together well & also stand alone well. The nice thing about such poems -- they are thought-provoking, conjuring up lots of additional ideas from the reader's imagination (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
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6 Years Ago
Thank you Margie. I appreciate the comment. I do appreciate.
Coyote, you have stripped away the flesh and have left us with the verbal bare bones with your beautiful words expressing raw emotion. Absolutely fantastic write.
I encourage you to continue with your writing. :-)
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6 Years Ago
Thank you Tamara. I will keep writing the shorter poetry.
6 Years Ago
No, do not limit yourself to one type of poetry.
Become proficient in all forms. If you do.. read moreNo, do not limit yourself to one type of poetry.
Become proficient in all forms. If you don't like rhyming, then write free verse, hakus, senyrus, etc.
I thought I reviewed this collection already. I love ten word contests. They make us strip away all the fluff and create pure image and or emotion, which you have done here.
My favorite maybe the last however if not that one the first is a photo finish second.
Posted 6 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you you Cherrie. I am glad you liked. I appreciate the comment.
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words.
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