One more dance

Just words.

                             So pretty

Please walk with me, please talk with me.

Allow our hearts to become one.

I want my hand holding your hand and I want you to hear you sing, sweet love words to me,

forever and a day.

I told you often.

You are so pretty, so beautiful and so wonderful.

You would kiss my face and whisper.

You are pretty too my love.

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                  One more dance

If I knew. We would of danced more.

If I knew. We would have walked in the Summer rain more often.

If I knew. We had only the Fall and the Winter.

I would have held you tighter and told you more.

You are my sweetness, my joy.

You were my Fall German sweet wine.

You became my Winter peace and 

you became my Spring. Sadness.

I prayed to the new Summer moon.

Bring her back to me and we would walk in the rain and not complain.

I would tell her.

Thank you.

                            Coyote

Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Tender words of loss. A love who moved on but left you with feelings of regret. I am picking up on emotions that tell me, if you had known, maybe you would have tried that little bit harder. Sometimes, things don't work out, however hard we try. She became your spring sadness and still you remember her with fondness. Lovely lines Coyote.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right Chris and thank you for reading. I do appreciate.

[angel]

Oh, I do understand. My only love belonged to another, and after she called aand told him he could go home to her, I never heard from him again. He had given me his phone number, to call if I ever needed anything, but how could I call and say, "Come back because all I need is you?
Such is lost and unrequited love.
I feel for you.

[kitty]

Words that mean a lot ~ to you, to me. Being of the sentimantal and romantic era your son, sung by the famous Andy Williams struck/ pulled at the heart strings! Thanks for the walk down memory lane CP! Had to re read!

[Carola]

i think it's more than 'just words' ....a lovely poem.
tender & soft remembrances.
although remembrances can deceive the reality of the past.

cheerio carola

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right Carola and thank you for reading and the comment.

[Weeping willow]

Lovely write, filled with memories of a love one ;-]

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[wordman]

if only we knew, or if we could try again
we would have danced much longer

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for stopping by. I do appreciate.

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John... malady is sweet grace... to look upon her face... and remember December... Amen truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree Pat. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[kitty]

mere words can stir up a sea of emotions washing ouver our souls. Thank you ror helping to revive special incidents in my own life....mymom and i got caught in the rain _ we just held hands and ran home..a 'fun' memory. The second was in the departure lounge... my then 'partner' never came back home. Strking. The video complimented your touching words. Thanks

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Kitty. You are right. Good words take us back to places missed.

[kitty]

Indeed! I agree completely!

[PurpleMuse]

Beautiful! Always love reading your stuff, Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.

[lightsong]

had to read it again and again... enchanting, so enchanting... to each cell of one's being.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate my friend.

[lightsong]

You are more than amazing my friend! I hope You are not tired of me keep telling You the same words again and again, but what a way with words You have... what a way You have to paint them so clearly, so powerfully into the sincerest and purest of emotions, from the first word to the last one You held and captivated my heart, senses and spirit, Your thoughts and expressions, they always amaze me... what a hauntingly beautiful song You've written to bless us with here, Thank You my friend, thank You!

[lightsong]

just this line my friend,
"If I knew. We would of danced more."
I think You missed the "have".

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the help. I do appreciate.

[Lydia Shutter]

Dance while you can and walk in the summer rain enjoying life...absolutely the way to live. Always so romantic...always a pleasure...to read your words, my friend. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lydia. Nice to walk on a hot Summer day in the rain.