Dear Autumn Christine

Just words

                    Dear Autumn Christine

I remember when I saw you standing alone and I went to you.
I told you. You are so damn beautiful. Please talk to me.

You laughed at my words and you asked me. Are you using trickery dear Johnnie?
I don't feel beautiful.

I whispered. Dear Autumn Christine. You have laughter and the eyes of a angel.
You made me wish to know you.
For us to dance and talk.
I want some gin and juice, slow dances and long kisses.
I want hot coffee and to see you at six am.
Without make-up and with real face.

Your eyes goes serious and you asked.
No-one know what I saw and done.
I'm like leftover wine.
Bitter and accepting alone.

Dear Autumn Christine. You are so damn beautiful to me.
All of us carry scars and regret.
I see the sadness in your eyes and I see the hunger in your eyes.

We are silhouettes waiting for someone to excite our mind, to excite our body.
I want to walk with you. My hand and your hand connected. One in the view of life, hope and chance.

Pretty Autumn Christine. Let's trick the gods.
Make them see two people seeking love and joy.
showing the world.
Love is sweet and kind.

Dear Autumn Christine.
You are so damn beautiful to me.
                            John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Falcon1]

Just words but I see the lines of her beautiful face the one I cannot erase from my minds eyes. A beautiful face that would make me smile for quit awhile. Seemingly so I would hold this one close wanting to never let her go. You write divinely of her Johnny in such a way I want to have her next to me and keep her this way. A smile and a wink away you will find me crawling at her feet. For now this is complete.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. You and I know. Beautiful face don't mean kind heart. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Excellent work well done again.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Like the autumn colours changing so is beauty so deep and true love so rare, beautiful and feelingful and felt, love heals and conquers all we must just be true to it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Poet. I appreciate your kind and sweet words.

[sette]

it is a touching poem and lucky is autumn christine to have a person loving and accepting her as she is

[Coyote Poetry]

We should and we must love the people for who they are. Can't change the sea and can't change a person ways and thoughts. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[andrew mitchell]

The beauty of our eyes is to capture these beautiful moments you expressed and to hold onto them. A lovely write yet again John. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder and like so many, we are only left with a glance and thats all!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree Andrew and thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Cherrie]

a lovers dance done to words, wonderful this poem is a rich bouquet of images

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Cherrie for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Dave]

John - this is so romantic. Your words flow as a fine wine overflowing onto a fine white tablecloth.
No beauty is lost, it's taste and its' image are both there.

I have been stagnant, for a while, but you inspire me. Thank you.

Take care - Dave

[Coyote Poetry]

You are too kind Dave. I appreciate the comment my friend.

[Dave]

I wasn't kidding - "The Cost" is part of what you inspired for me.
Thanks - Dave

[KCthelastboyscout]

Women are intoxicating creatures.they make us write words and stories such as this.love is an appropriate addiiction.well done as always

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Without women. What we write about? Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.
Coyote

[Vivian Fisk]

"Let's trick the gods."

To the young these are mere words...oh, to be young again.

Coyote, you are gentle and subtle but right on the money.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Mr.Writer]

This is amazing aww... I love this! Such an emotional real write.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I do appreciate the comment.

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :))

[Corset]

Beauty in the eyes of the beholder, sad and beautiful and beautifully sad, always lovely to read you.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Corset for reading and the comment. I agree. Beauty was nice but a woman with wild eyes and great energy. Always tempted me.