Break me, make me believe

Just words

                             Break me, make me believe
                       

I want to be here. This is the place I need to be,
Pretty lady.
Break me, make me believe in you.
Make me believe in the long night and
make me believe.
You need me.

Kiss me, break me.
Make me live and die in your eyes.

I want your hands in my hands.
I want to feel the tender touch of your demanding hands on my wanting skin.
I need your  soft lips upon my lips.
Making me sing out in joy and thankfulness.

I want to hear your soft voice.
Telling me.
Please Poet seize my heart and make me beg for more.
I want to sing words of love that will make the Gods smile.

I brought my pretty lady closer and I whispered.
You sang to me and you make me believe.
Love is sweet and wonderful.
I want to hear you whisper.

Break me, take me.
Make me believe  you will  love till we can't love no-more.

                         John Castellenas/Coyote

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Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Gejodi]

Just words ...but so so beautiful...sometimes I wonder what inspires us to write what we do no matter how beautiful OR ugly the verse! Like information on Facebook or such never to be erased the words of the poet, the canvas of the painter...will always remain though we be long gone! Great work!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Ted Kniffen]

Not just words, John. Words of love and passion tinged with a lovely eroticism that combines to produce a very good write.
Ted

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ted. I appreciate the comment.

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Ever yearning and romantic, Coyote.

Sometimes it takes one of a pair of lovers to have the strength to endure all the trials and tame the other who is always faintly trying to break free. It is the pinnacle of passionate love to want to tame a lover so as to keep them eternally by your side.

This is another one of your Romantic gems, always written with a sense of realism and experience.

Fine work, my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Doodley. I appreciate the comment my friend.

[Mirror]

"Please Poet seize my heart and make me beg for more." When i read this line, Soft smile came to my lips. And as though you saw me smile, your next line replied, "I want to sing words of love that will make the Gods smile."

Thank you for that. lovely write