Break me, make me believe

Just words

                             Break me, make me believe
                       

I want to be here. This is the place I need to be,
Pretty lady.
Break me, make me believe in you.
Make me believe in the long night and
make me believe.
You need me.

Kiss me, break me.
Make me live and die in your eyes.

I want your hands in my hands.
I want to feel the tender touch of your demanding hands on my wanting skin.
I need your  soft lips upon my lips.
Making me sing out in joy and thankfulness.

I want to hear your soft voice.
Telling me.
Please Poet seize my heart and make me beg for more.
I want to sing words of love that will make the Gods smile.

I brought my pretty lady closer and I whispered.
You sang to me and you make me believe.
Love is sweet and wonderful.
I want to hear you whisper.

Break me, take me.
Make me believe  you will  love till we can't love no-more.

                         John Castellenas/Coyote

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Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Gejodi]

Just words ...but so so beautiful...sometimes I wonder what inspires us to write what we do no matter how beautiful OR ugly the verse! Like information on Facebook or such never to be erased the words of the poet, the canvas of the painter...will always remain though we be long gone! Great work!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[3X3MPLER]

this is a passionate piece of writing, i would definately love to read more of this

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Gozer]

Genuine emotion displayed here, well executed message and distinctively fresh wordplay. This could make a gal's heart palpitate.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Gozer]

Of course, poetry is, after all, our soup de jour.

[Ardra]

I brought my pretty lady closer and I whispered.
You sang to me and you make me believe.
Love is sweet and wonderful.
I want to hear you whisper.

Break me, take me.
Make me believe you will love till we can't love no-more.

mmmm love it John... always a Fan of your Just words :)
and love that song too.... you sang to me...

[Coyote Poetry]

A outstanding song and thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Alfred Kukitz]

I’m convinced this women will love you forever even if you occasionally forget to wipe your feet.

Regards,
Al

[Poetic License]

This is so heart achingly beautiful. The sentiment is so vulnerable and exposed.

"I want to hear your soft voice.
Telling me.
Please Poet seize my heart and make me beg for more.
I want to sing words of love that will make the Gods smile."

Two hearts, willingly broken through love and mended together. If all fairy tales had such an ending.

Thank you for sharing this one. It speaks to me. Definitely going to my favorites.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading. I appreciate.

[Ruth]

The give and take of love. Always a poignant sacrifice to love I believe and so it should be for in that breaking down of self and re-finding of self with another the other grows also in the process and the bond shared becomes a powerful strength to both :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Poppy. I appreciate the comment and I agree.

[Irenic]

Break me, make me believe in you.
Make me believe in the long night and
make me believe.
You need me.

These lines are very catchy.

I want to hear your soft voice.
Telling me.
Please Poet seize my heart and make me beg for more.
I want to sing words of love that will make the Gods smile.


the whole poem is very catchy and romantic

Thanks for sharing :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Irenic]

You are welcome:)

[Debbie Barry]

You say they're just words, but they're pretty words, expressing strong needs and emotions. It's ice to see a love song on here that doesn't need a mature reader warning! It makes me like your words more.

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful song. We need people who make us want to sing. Good to had found you today and you are welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow...such a poet's plea...break me...take my heart and own all of the pieces...the only way i am whole is with you...

j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jacob for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.