Break me, make me believe

Just words

                             Break me, make me believe
                       

I want to be here. This is the place I need to be,
Pretty lady.
Break me, make me believe in you.
Make me believe in the long night and
make me believe.
You need me.

Kiss me, break me.
Make me live and die in your eyes.

I want your hands in my hands.
I want to feel the tender touch of your demanding hands on my wanting skin.
I need your  soft lips upon my lips.
Making me sing out in joy and thankfulness.

I want to hear your soft voice.
Telling me.
Please Poet seize my heart and make me beg for more.
I want to sing words of love that will make the Gods smile.

I brought my pretty lady closer and I whispered.
You sang to me and you make me believe.
Love is sweet and wonderful.
I want to hear you whisper.

Break me, take me.
Make me believe  you will  love till we can't love no-more.

                         John Castellenas/Coyote

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Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Gejodi]

Just words ...but so so beautiful...sometimes I wonder what inspires us to write what we do no matter how beautiful OR ugly the verse! Like information on Facebook or such never to be erased the words of the poet, the canvas of the painter...will always remain though we be long gone! Great work!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Indigomoon]

I love it very beautiful you have a talent for romantic poems my friend. I shall continue reading your poems as I find them breathtaking and simply beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate the kind words.

[Indigomoon]

Anytime my friend:)

[barleygirl]

You make "surrender" sound soooo tempting! I believe that all good experiences require a fair amount of surrender, so your message of taking a dive into love/passion resembles the true magic of coming together (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Margie for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

What an awesome love song you wrote here Coyote! The title, form, lyrics, , bridge- all so deeply moving and perfect...”your demanding hands on my wanting skin”...sensual, graceful, musical, beautiful!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Annette. I appreciate the comment.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

You’re very welcome Coyote!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautiful poem! It read with passion, beauty and poetry! I love that song, and it's video. I listen to it often.
Tyfs!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A great song and thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome!

[emmajoy]

' Please Poet seize my heart and make me beg for more.
I want to sing words of love that will make the Gods smile. '

Loving, wanting, needing.. every word, every phrase.. as near to beautiful heat as one could write"

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[emmajoy]

Always It's always a pleasure to read your posts, john..

[Weeping willow]

Flows out like a song in the country music scene ;-]
Wonderfully expressed.

[Coyote Poetry]

This was my goal. A song. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[The Iron Horseman]

Very beautiful, my friend. The healing power of a good woman is phenomenal!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree and thank you for reading and the comment.

[The Iron Horseman]

You're welcome. Coyote.

[Matthew Kult]

Poetically Romantic

Great Read

Matthew

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Matthew. I appreciate the comment.

[Angie G]

Wow.. Just words you say.. But for a moment you made me believe. Exquisite piece my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.