A spring flower

A poem for my story- poet's love

A Spring flower




Was a Spring flower.
So tall and so beautiful.

Was a Spring flower.
That reached for the sky.
The sky and the sun adored her.

She would dance with the wind.
The wind would whisper love songs to her.

Late Summer came and the flower slowly weaken and faded away.
The sky cries great rain/snow and the sun hid behind the clouds.

In early Spring.
The flower appeared again.

The rain and snow stopped.
The sun shined from morning dawn to nightly dust.

The gentle wind danced with the beautiful flower again.
The world became beautiful and wonderful once again.
                           John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Poem for my story.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Such a delightful poem, full of joy and the flame of hope that burns eternal in the human spirit. The poem is very endearing in its simplicity and beauty and will stay in my heart for a long time to come. I read it out aloud to my son and he was spellbound!

The gentle wind danced with the beautiful flower again.
The world became beautiful and wonderful once again.

Awesome!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Divya. I appreciate the kind words and comment.

[AYVID N]

It was such a joy to read, sir. Thank you for sharing!

[H.L. Cerveise]

My fellow warrior poet I love this poem. The flow and the stanzas are great. I had to read it twice because it left me wanting to see the seasons again.

Well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.

[Shuvadip Mallik]

Wow, So warm and beautiful. The whole poem was like a freshening shower to me... SO wonderful

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Mirror]

Good personification and metonymy play. Great write, Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[lightsong]

So very very lovely, so very tender, loving like the sweetest gentlest dream... like the warmest breath, a true enchanting piece... and that a man who wrote it, makes it even more charming, sheer splendor! Thank You 🌼

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Light. I appreciate the kind words.

[Zoya]

Gives the feeling that one gets after reading 'daffodils'. Such a radiant piece. Beautifully written!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Zoe. I appreciate the comment.

[Zoya]

You're welcome

[NANCY DON]

This is so cool my friend. Well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Nancy for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Ashwin Shanker]

Someday, I would try and write a poem about flowers as well. You have definitely inspired me to do so with your great writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad my friend and thank you for reading and the comment.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The seasons and the cycle of life mixed as one in a poem with great feeling. Spell check 'dusk to dawn'.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you John for reading and the help.

[Najam Us Saher]

Wonderful imagery and the scene you have created is very pleasing. I really liked this a lot, very refreshing to read.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Najam. I appreciate the comment.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome sir. It was my pleasure reading this.