I will take care of you

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                               I will take of you-For Paloma


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                   You will be never alone my love

Your face, your eyes and the motion of your body dancing to the sweet jazz.
Make me know and understand.
Sweet wines kisses and late night dancing alone.
You are my first wish and you are my last wish.
Dear Paloma.
Need no promises made and I whispered to you.
You will be never alone my love.
                                Johnnie

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                      I will take care of you
Pretty dress, tempting smile and eyes of a thousand journeys.
You come to me and you embrace me tightly.
You whispered. I will take care of you Johnnie.
You have died and lived for me.
Now I will stand with you in the good days and the bad days.
You won't be alone no-more.
We will cry together, laugh at the world together and find death together.
Dear Johnnie. I will take care you till I can't no-more.
Love sweet, love hard. Love poisons and love lasting.
We have known everything and we have known nothing.
Please dear Johnnie. No more goodbyes. Just a million hellos.

Johnnie smiled and soft tears fell and he whispered.
I will take care of you baby, sweetheart and my kind angel.
I love you Paloma.
                            John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Poetry for my story.

Reviews

[Raghib]

An awesome poem about love . An inspiring work that instills the desire to write more .

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Outsider]

Wow, this is so sweet and beautiful. The words flow together and paint an engaging and lovely picture.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Outsider. I appreciate the comment.

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Your words are so dreamy, John. "eyes of a thousand journeys" You are in love with love, sir. Beautiful poems

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. Without love. What would we be?

[Tomás Ó C..]

Nice love poem. Lucky Paloma!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading my friend. I do appreciate. The poem for a story I'm writing.

[Tomás Ó Cárthaigh]

I see that there now!

[V.L.Mir]

I love reading this poem, sir. I can feel the love you have for each other through these words. Crying, laughing at the world and finding death together ...just wow. Though, just don't love the poison too much. :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. Love can be sweet and love can be sour. Need both to appreciate love. The real gift.

[AYVID N]

Your words invoke such an ocean of feelings in the readers' hearts. Where would the world be, but for such undying, unfettered love and devotion! My prayers for such love to abide till eternity. My thanks for such unforgettable poetry sir.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[AYVID N]

It was such a joy to read, sir.

[Sean M. Addams]

a very deep and beautiful piece. overall a very amazing write.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sean. I appreciate the comment.

[Sean M. Addams]

no problem

[Paul Bell]

The final journey is the journey of togetherness.
Love the passion running through your poem.
Johnie wont be leaving ever again.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right Paul and thank you for reading and the comment.

[Mirror]

"....eyes of a thousand journeys.. " Wow.
"Please dear Johnnie. No more goodbyes. Just a million hellos."

Fantastic.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Mirror. I appreciate the comment.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

I like this piece. thanks for sharing your wonderful talent.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are very kind Roxane and thank you for reading and the comment.