Lover, Lover, lover.

A rewrite

Lover, lover, lover

A Poem by Coyote Poetry

Leonard Cohen song gave me reason to write.

                                  Burning desire

Locked doors took us to the utopia of the embrace and the sweet kiss. Protected by the whispers of Leonard Cohen songs in the background. Love was new and you were my only need. Your gentle whispers of, lover, lover, lover. Let's become one in the cold of the night. Release the veil of protection and dance in the fantasy of where love is life. Life is love. I brought you close and kissed warm welcoming lips and I told you. We are dancing on dangerous ground of no return and I will risk everything for you. Love sealed with sweet kiss and embrace.



                         Lover. lover, lover.


You asked me to define love. I looked in your green eyes and caressed your auburn hair. I told you. True love is like a free river. No boundaries or limits. When love is alive. You find places of no return and seek new places where lovers roam freely and safely. She whispered. Lover, lover, lover. Allow your hands to show me I'm alive. Allow your lips to make me tremble and move with joy. Let's become one in our secret world and place. I brought her close. Allowed the night to become day. Holding her close and wishing to never leave our safe place.

                                Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[lightsong]

All Your pieces have Your deep personal touch, it feels like You are living a fairytale Your own words create, living alone in Your private world, somehow I feel deep sadness and wistfulness brush all the words I read till now, lonelinesses where You soothe it away with Your loving dreamy pieces... they all mean so much to You, not just something, I respect all of them, and keep them flowing "treasurely".

Happiest Blessings*

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Romantic and sensual and full of your mix which tells the tale that conformity often restrains us from creating a wider love in society.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right John and thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

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Again Leonard Cohen make me stop by here. I can feel and read . Leonard is your great muse. There is some kind of same mood and words go deep with gentle touch. You try also make deep contact with your reader. And thats works well too. My friend well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate. Cohen songs are amazing. He was the Poet of song.

[...]

Yes he was really talented and beautiful soul.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

"True love is like a free river. No boundaries or limits."- tender and true. A vignette of ecstasy where your lover is also your muse. Flows like satin. Words caress. Appreciate Leonard Cohen reference and music. Thank you so much Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Annette for reading and the comment. Leonard Cohen. A needed muse for my writing.

[Neville]

These are not just ordinary words, these are extraordinary words that will resonate over and over in the hearts and minds of countless visitors who have but briefly been there. I am just one.......N

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Neville. I appreciate the comment.

[Neville]

My pleasure entirely.....

[θεά]

A very passionate and torrid piece Coyote. Intended to be sensual, sultry and aesthetic, this has successfully managed to serve its purpose.

Best,
M.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Mallika. I appreciate the comment.

[Patrick Ramsey]

Just words :-) Interesting stream of consciousness type formatting, with the theme of lover lover lover. I like it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Christopher for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[ms. barrie]

this is such a gorgeous write, that captures (is a snapshot) of the the very essence of romance and love. quite moving and beautifully written. thank you for sharing ~ xx - barrie

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend. I appreciate the comment.

[ms. barrie]

you're most welcome, was a pleasure to read :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

wonderful write it is....i loved ur work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Wajiha. I do appreciate your comment and kind words.

[Ehra Khan]

Raw emotions, deep and absolutely moving! It's an amazing write!:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Inaya. I appreciate the comment.