Celestial beauty

Just words.

  Celestial beauty

"He sees his love, and nothing else he sees."---Thomas Campion

You are my folly and my blessings.
You are my perfect night and my sweetest days.

You love to take one hour baths and listening to the songs of the Everly brothers.



I sit by he bathtub watching your nuptial grace. Watching dancing bubbles dance on ivory soft skin and perfect womanly curves.

You asked me often. Am I your bliss or your needed kiss? Do you adore me my dear Johnnie? I told you. You are the music in my heart and the vision of you is the only utopia of perfection I have ever seen or known. The luscious smell of flowers on your soft and tender skin inflame my heart and mind.

You are my kind muse, my boundless sea and my journey to unknown and places of mystery. You are my reasons to breathe and live. You know what love should be. I love watching you in the bathtub and I love to wash your hair slow and gently. I love to hear you sing with the Everly brothers in your eloquent voice.

You make love sweet and kind. You know love need to be simmered to greater need. You understand, temptation and wanderlust need long baths and loving hands.

You are my everything.



                             John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Carol Cashes]

Yes, leisurely bathing is as sensual and satisfying as sex. This was very relatable to me and the song references blended with your words make it a new song for your love. Good job.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Carol. I do appreciate the comment.

[mae23]

Loved the incorporation of songs. Lovely piece full of emotion.

[Coyote Poetry]

Old song make wonderful muses. Thank you Mae for reading and the comment.

[mae23]

Truly my pleasure.

[AprilRN1210]

awww this is what sweet tenderness feels like.. pure emotion here told in a soft, romantic way. lovely writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love this and put together with songs a winner good work

[Coyote Poetry]

Music is my muse. Thank you Julie for reading and the comment.

[MOON]

Beautifully told , songs complement , the simple moments of love are magical

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Moon. I appreciate the comment.

[Decidious wind]

This is deeply romantic. The narrator explicity explores his adoration for his lover. It amazes me how simple things like just bathing spark alot of romance and move many feelings in a person.

[Coyote Poetry]

Bathing is time for conversation and tender touch. Simple act as washing a person hair. Make people become closer. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

ah indeed Coyote. As always you capture the mix of romance and sadness in people who have known pain and disappointment.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you John. I appreciate the comment.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is word of love and great understanding. Sometimes we would
Move mountains for the one we love.

The words flow softly much like the overall feel of this piece. Soft loving sensual

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend. I appreciate the comment.

[Ken Simm.]

Perfect paen of praise and love. I love it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ken. I appreciate the comment.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

So tenderly passionate and so sensual. You provided a Great soundtrack to your poem as always Coyote. "I love to wash your hair slow and gently"- a beautiful dream! Any woman would love to have that dream. Bravo!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Annette. All of us need TLC.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Yes we do my friend! You are the Master of TLC!:))