A beautiful Spring day and the dance of the flowers.

Just words

 


                The dance of the flowers.

My dear and sweet love, please come walk with me. My love, please dance with me in the field of the wildflowers.
Today the earth is alive and you and I are free to see the trees in bloom and the green earth alive and so beautiful.
 

Please my dear love. Let's dance in the wild flowers fields and near the Lake St. Clair.
You and I. Blessed by the moving water and the dancing branches of the  leaves of the trees.
Today the trees are colorful and alive.
You and I can fall into the sound of kind nature.
Today you and I will celebrate the beauty of our earth and see the dance of the free flowers and tree blossoming.

                                      John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Decidious wind]

A wise man once said, " there is beauty in simplicity" this poem truly shows that. Due to its simplicity this poem sounds very innocent and pure. I love it! I also very much appreciate how you have linked nature to dancing. When i was younger i often thought that plants danced with the wind.

[Coyote Poetry]

I do believe plants do dance. They follow the sun and dance with the wind. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Hi]

Nice; whimsical, sweet and alluring. Thanks Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Matt for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Hope]

I loved the imagery you created:)
Also the beauty of nature is well expressed!
Thank you so much for sharing!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Neetha for reading and the comment.

[L.C. Jarrette]

ahww..i can't help but smile while reading this.this is really lovely.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Lydia Shutter]

Gloriously romantic words...dancing off the page! So very lovely. Lydi****

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lydia for reading and the comment. Dance, nature and love. Utopia.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

A beautiful Spring day and the dance of the flowers the title itself is alluring and your words are very expressive and romantic. Beautiful prose with a charming song.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sky. I appreciate the comment. I love the warm days of May and June.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your most welcome my friend :) Yes May and June are special.

[barleygirl]

I love-love-love your spring invitation to DANCE!!! Very alluring & lyrical . . . I might have to go outside & dance a bit before I continue on! *wink! wink!*

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too. I'm going out now to find a beach or park. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Sami Khalil]

Poem and video are amazing. So simple but so lovely on all levels. Your words blossom and dance with nature and hearts...Excellent, sir...:)...................

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sami for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ....::::))))

[...Relic...]

Your words in this poem may be 'just words as you say, but to me they are alive with love, happiness and adventure.

Well done Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Allen Smuckler]

Beautiful and meaningful words, however... which make them more than just words... Terrific write Coyote...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Allen. I love the days of Spring.

[Elizabeth]

The use of imagery is commendable! i love how you've depicted the Earth as a dance floor and the trees and flowers as dancers. Totally amazing!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and he comment. Wise people love nature and can see the trees and flowers dancing.