The lovely silence The real poets and writers know. The silence is golden. Words become meaningless in the midnight hours. True lovers don't need to speak. They allow their mouth, hands and body to send their message of need to their lovers.
Sweet lady whispered please don't say nothing and her soft hands danced on willing skin of her lover. In the midnight hours, lovers don't seek permission. They open their minds, hearts and body. They don't take and steal. They give and expose willing places and skin. They are willing to climb the mountain of wild and deep passion. Three a.m lovers don't seek forgiveness and repair. They seek solemn place where lips and body become one till the morning light.
Pretty woman eyes filled with love and hope. Perfect words said to lucky man. In the quiet of the night. We can be saviors, takers and givers. We can be gentle or we can be fighters seeking some kind of peace and salvation in the turmoil of the sexual dance.
First and last words spoken should be. You are my everything, my only need and want.
Passionate, heartfelt words that speak volumes in a tender, meaningful voice. Whomever you need and want ... certainly must feel needed and wanted. Well done again, Coyote.
One critique because I struggled with it... "three am lovers" probably should be three a.m. lovers or 3 A.M. lovers. Your choice of course but I read it as three am lovers... as if "am" were a verb.
Poem was a gem though. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you Allen for reading and the help. I do appreciate.
Oh my romantic and wise friend. This piece gave me gooseflesh.
"In the midnight hours, lovers don't seek permission. They open their minds, hearts and body. They don't take and steal. They give and expose willing places and skin."
I felt this all the way to my toes in such a way that made me smile wistfully and want to openly weep at the same moment. There is so much to be said for these thoughts, these moments, the still, silence of the night when so much more is spoken than words. I am truly overcome by your ability to put the sacred into words and to do it so eloquently.
Truly, a masterpiece my sweet friend. Your muses are both fortunate and blessed.
Big hugs for your big heart.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you dear friend. I appreciate the kind words.
Passionate, heartfelt words that speak volumes in a tender, meaningful voice. Whomever you need and want ... certainly must feel needed and wanted. Well done again, Coyote.
One critique because I struggled with it... "three am lovers" probably should be three a.m. lovers or 3 A.M. lovers. Your choice of course but I read it as three am lovers... as if "am" were a verb.
Poem was a gem though. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you Allen for reading and the help. I do appreciate.
This what I call talk to me ''in energy''. Let me feel your aura, energy, instead of your words.
it's true lover don't need words just the chemistry between them.
it's so beautiful written.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you Donicca. I agree with your words and thoughts.
My favorite line: "We can be gentle or we can be fighters seeking some kind of peace and salvation in the turmoil of the sexual dance." Nicely written. Thank you for sharing this powerful poem.
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