Feel like love

Just words.

                           

                                     Feel like love

Life  is a cold and deadly teacher.

I thoughts I had everything and I learned after I  touched and held  your hand.

Money and title were the small parts of my life.

Your beautiful face and kind words taught me.

Love  is life. Life is love.

When you are near. Sweetheart, baby and dear lady.

You feel like love.

                                John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Diamond]

A thoughtful writing on the value of having a loved one by your side. Life is no doubt a cold teacher, however it serves us in the picture bigger than life. It brings the best out of us in the bigger picture. And the best is to become that love. Enjoyed.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. You are right.

[ms. barrie]

an enjoyable ink you've penned, quite pensive, with a dash of cynicism/honesty.

your play on words, (imagery), and meter reminds me of lyrics/a start of them perhaps. thank you for sharing- x

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome, it was my pleasure :)

[Tiana]

Such a delightful read this evening. Feels like love to me. Great poem, Coyote ☺

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Tiana. I appreciate the comment.

[Emily]

Neat piece...brief and touching.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Emily. I appreciate the comment.

[Paul]

An enjoyable read. I couldn't agree with you more, about life being a cold and deadly teacher. The experiences we all share make us who we truly are.
Well done!

Paul

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Paul. I appreciate the comment.

[Kesha]

I really liked this piece! That's so true too, life is a cold teacher & it has no regrets

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right, but we cannot give-up or give-in. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Kesha]

You are welcome :)

[yuhee]

No matter how cold life is, love will surely melt it.Very nice poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right dear Poet and thank you for reading.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

love is a powerful necessity for all, and that is evident in your blunt and concise words

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear friend. I appreciate the comment.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John... Sometimes a lover can warm our lives like sunshine soothes a dreary day... A smile can clear away the blues. A Cup of tea shared with a friend who understands can be a blessing. The miracles of life are that we can see and hear so many beautiful things each and every day. Have a lovely Spring. truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Pat. You are right dear friend.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

These are beautiful words. Life is indeed a cold teacher but sometimes it teaches the most warm lessons..
I enjoyed reading this. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend. I appreciate the comment.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Coyote! Always a pleasure reading your work :)

[Mary]

just words, but heartfelt ones. I really like the opening line. thank you for this poem- actually I needed to hear it this evening.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Mary. I'm glad you liked.