Down, baby down

Just words.

                      


                        Down, baby, down

Dreaming and believing.

Living and dying.

Loving and hating.

Lying and crying.

Good days and the bad days.

Demanding or careless.

Song and slow dance.

Deeper and deeper we shall fall.

Down, baby, down and

we shall fall.

Are you down baby?

Are we trying? or just pretending?

Are we in love?

Do you know me?

Do I know you?

                              John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words. Something new.

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

using rhetorical questions is very new for you; nice change of pace

[Coyote Poetry]

A change of pace. I appreciate the comment dear friend.

[Hebe]

Age old questions to the mystery of love... It has the feel of a song and a guileless quality... excellent!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Hebe. The mystery of love. A question with no endings.

[Hebe]

Too true my friend.... that's what keeps us going ...

[Lydia Shutter]

Wow, John....this could be set to music easily! I liked it a lot. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lydia. Good song made me wish to write.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This was a nice read for me! I liked the lyrical quality to this one. A good flow and rhythm too! Simply beautiful words 👍

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! It was a pleasure reading your work 😊

[Sagar Waingankar]

Words and feelings are deep if you think them to be.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right Sagar and thank you for reading and the comment.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Feels a little like a drunken (high) dance with a woman who the protagonist is unsure about in terms of their intention. Interesting, whirlwind of a piece which had me giddy!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you John. I appreciate the comment.