I was condemn

Just words

coyotepoet reblogged insanamentelm

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                I was condemn after I saw your face

I was looking for the wide open road and  some kind of freedom.

She sat alone on a barren road on the back road of Texas and I saw her.

I couldn’t look away from her long legs and beautiful face.

She told me. “You are late Johnnie.  Never  keep a pretty lady waiting.

I looked at  her hazel green eyes and I knew I was condemn  forever.

I told her. I promise you the sea and some strong whiskey.

My pretty lady. You make my world so damn beautiful.

She smiled and she told me.  “Sweet words and wonderful promises

will make me  forgive you Johnnie.

                                   John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Sweetly done ... Yet, beware, for a lady who knows that she is pretty is the first sign of a heart that shall soon be broken into pieces of wailing tears of sorrow for all those tomorrows that shall never be enjoyed in her embrace ... The poor man is never, ever, the same again ... But she shall find another and never consider her sin ... Because, any man can be her friend ... For a moment ... In time ..

I enjoy your heart penned to page and I feel the emotion that lies oozing between each and every line ...

Marv

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Marvin. I appreciate the comment.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

beauty is powerful, even if it is superficial; i am glad your words reflect this sentiment

[Coyote Poetry]

Superficial is enough sometimes. Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment.

[Mary]

Such sweet words- "I promise you the sea and some strong whiskey" so human and real!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Mary. We need the simple things. Good company and some laughter.

[Valentine]

It would be nice to have such memories from the past. Not all people have sweet memories. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

The photo helped from Tumblr. Photos, music and reading. My muses. Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment.

[Writing Angel]

awe this soothes and melts my heart...such sweet words

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.

[DeerInHeadlights]

:) just words.. but such a happy happy image. words and promises do make us forgive.. hoping soon action will take the place of the words. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. This truly shows the nature of girls. How they really hate waiting and they express their anger and when sweet words are said to them they really melt. I loved this poem it is truly heart touching. I could imagine the scenario.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Najam. I appreciate the comment and you are right. Never keep a girl a-waiting.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes...No need of thanks. ☺

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah you are a sucker for those eyes and those legs as you paint us yet another encounter scene with a lover. Feels real.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you John. Just good photo making old memories come alive.