Wanderlust

Just words

 


                    Wanderlust

--
                         Damn those eyes

Pretty face, demanding loving eyes.
Soft voice making me feel weak and captured.
Soft touch of hands making me fall into deep embrace.
Those eyes make me swim in the dangerous river of hope.
Damn those eyes.
Those eyes make me want to know wanderlust and forget where I was going
Fall into your embrace and become drunk with you in a wild love and untamed love. You and I.

---

                        Write on me

Milky white Winter skin showing and your robust body moving slowly to the song.
You dance near the candles and the candle lights are weaving. Leonard is singing "The Stranger song" and I watch you dance for me. You fall to my feet and you whispered. "You are my poetry, you are my love, you are my curse and I need you to make me pay for loving you. Write on me. Write deeply upon my wanting skin. Epic words to make the Gods jealous and I need you to make me feel wanted and needed. Make me scream, make me yearn and make me love." The poet smiled and he tasted the sweet kiss of his loving woman and he whispered. I love your face, I love your voice and I love when you whispered to me to me my kind muse, my lover and my darling. You are my everything and I will write a 100,000 words of love for you.

                         John Castellenas/Coyote

                        



                      

Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Beautiful and so lovely!

One of my fav. lines:
You dance near the candles and the candle lights are weaving.

A little touch (e) of sensuality & pleasure you keep within the depth of your words. For a moment, I was just like: "wow". Every inch of your niche words's very measurable & lovingly written. You ain't just speak the heart but also "write" down its beats upon... poetry. Great job, Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

The singer is amazing too. A talented lady. My muse for many poems. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Wórdsmíth]

Of course, the lady is as white as flower, as soft as its shadow, as lovely as love, and as talented as a full combo of music. You have a very great choice, Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend. I would love to see her in concert.

[Michael S]

I liked this John
Pretty face, demanding loving eyes.
Soft voice making me feel weak and captured.
Soft touch of hands making me fall into deep embrace.
Those eyes make me swim in the dangerous river of hope.
Damn those eyes.
I loved these above lines much.
Thanks for sharing this lovely write

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Michael. I appreciate the kind words.

[Brokensoul]

This is intoxicating, romantic, passionate and consummate. I love this piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.

[PhoenixDown]

I enjoyed this piece. Has a dual sort of sense to it. 2 parts if you will.

"Soft voice making me feel weak and captured."
love this line. I can easily identify with it. To fall in love can feel like being captured in a sense.

I enjoyed write on me as well. I liked seeing the build of emotions from the beginning unleash in Write on Me. Deep veins here my friend. Well done.

Phoenix

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Phoenix. I appreciate the comment.

[PhoenixDown]

You are welcome my friend.

[Bo Lanier]

"Damn those eyes!"...i like it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Bo. I appreciate the comment.

[aLittlePain]

Tender, loving poetry John! Some captivating lines....as always you show us your heart. R xo

'

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

Your words have soft and tender tone here.

I can sense a deep love between you and her in this poem.

Thank you for sharing it John.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are very kind my dear friend. Thank you Sarah for reading and the comment.

[Giulia King]

Amazing poem! "Soft voice making me feel weak and captured." ""You are my poetry, you are my love, you are my curse" These are not just words. Your poem is truly excellent

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Gullia. I appreciate the comment.

[PaintedBirdy]

wow, this is fantastic, Coyote! every line is perfect. i like the leonard cohen reference too, haha, it really builds the atmosphere. i really like your use of the word 'wanderlust' in this context too, because it adds so much more dimension to a passionate relationship than just regular lust. wonderful job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.

[OhSnapShley]

Aw, I can see the two lovers now. Such a nice picture you created with your words.

Kudos.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear poet for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[wordman]

a beautiful poem of love and feelings,great write

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.

[wordman]

always a pleasure john.