Wanderlust

Just words

 


                    Wanderlust

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                         Damn those eyes

Pretty face, demanding loving eyes.
Soft voice making me feel weak and captured.
Soft touch of hands making me fall into deep embrace.
Those eyes make me swim in the dangerous river of hope.
Damn those eyes.
Those eyes make me want to know wanderlust and forget where I was going
Fall into your embrace and become drunk with you in a wild love and untamed love. You and I.

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                        Write on me

Milky white Winter skin showing and your robust body moving slowly to the song.
You dance near the candles and the candle lights are weaving. Leonard is singing "The Stranger song" and I watch you dance for me. You fall to my feet and you whispered. "You are my poetry, you are my love, you are my curse and I need you to make me pay for loving you. Write on me. Write deeply upon my wanting skin. Epic words to make the Gods jealous and I need you to make me feel wanted and needed. Make me scream, make me yearn and make me love." The poet smiled and he tasted the sweet kiss of his loving woman and he whispered. I love your face, I love your voice and I love when you whispered to me to me my kind muse, my lover and my darling. You are my everything and I will write a 100,000 words of love for you.

                         John Castellenas/Coyote

                        



                      

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Beautiful and so lovely!

One of my fav. lines:
You dance near the candles and the candle lights are weaving.

A little touch (e) of sensuality & pleasure you keep within the depth of your words. For a moment, I was just like: "wow". Every inch of your niche words's very measurable & lovingly written. You ain't just speak the heart but also "write" down its beats upon... poetry. Great job, Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

The singer is amazing too. A talented lady. My muse for many poems. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Wórdsmíth]

Of course, the lady is as white as flower, as soft as its shadow, as lovely as love, and as talented as a full combo of music. You have a very great choice, Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend. I would love to see her in concert.

[Hebe]

.....you can definately make the Gods jealous, with your passionate and sensual way of expression!

[Hebe]

Great song!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. She is amazing. She can sing. She is one of my favorites now.

[Nicole Laszlo]

This was really intense, and certainly a bit different from a couple of your others. Vivid and beautiful imagery. Your pen certainly captures the appreciation of the eye. Again, I'm not a romantic, but I rather enjoyed this one. Well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Nicole. All of us have some romantic blood left. Sometime hidden away. I'm a old man. I would love a wild journey once more. Too late for the Grandfather of today.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John... the wanderlust of your poetry has captured a lost chord that
makes sense of destiny... truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Pat. I appreciate the comment.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

the last stanza sounds like a fantasy that's replayed in the minds of many enamored men :)

very lovely words that glorify - not subjugate - the beauty of women

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. When two people find safe haven. No better place to know.

[The dark story]

At times I wonder, are words enough to capture the essence, the power of all the passion and emotions felt at one point. These lines, just left me awed, made me realise the power of love. the power of poetry.

"Those eyes make me swim in the dangerous river of hope."
"Epic words to make the Gods jealous "

You are a beautiful writer who fills the pages with living flesh and emotions.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Atiba. I appreciate your comment.

[Diamond]

I love the usage of "dangerous river of hope"....how hope can be dangerous. It can be when it can submerge your life into itself. A very beautiful write. Thank you for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Queen. Sometime we hope for too much or too little.

[Diamond]

So right. it was my pleasure reading it.

[An owl on the moon]

You create this atmosphere of longing that just fills every season of your poetry with sensuality and that frightening place of surrender. There is a vast essence here, pulling at the heavens as you are drawn into her life, and the light illuminates the whole earth with your love for her. So well done, my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.

[An owl on the moon]

So glad you still take us on your journeys.

[bhavya]

"Those eyes make me swim in the dangerous river of hope.
Damn those eyes"

Excellent lines. All we want is to be described by someone. Just the way you did.. Loved this poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Bhavya. You are right. All of us want to be loved, like we are the only one.

[bhavya]

You are welcome :)

[Papaya]

I enjoy that dangerous river of hope. Such a beautiful piece of writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Ana. I appreciate the comment.

[Papaya]

Always a pleasure!