Keep you

Just words

 

                       

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                          Keep you

I remember the day you saved me.
Your gentle eyes of hazel green saw me and
you caressed my face with your soft hands and you whispered.
"been too long dear Johnnie and you have been too sad. You need some tender loving care."

You embraced me and whispered.
"I will keep you safe my love and we will erase the bad days.
We will find the sea again and dance/drink with the sea till the old days are forgotten.
We will sing the sinner's lullaby and pray for rare and treasure place where we can be reborn."

I brought you closer and I whispered to you.
Dear Liz. Kind and sweet Elizabeth. You are my last wish to sing and dance to the sea and the night stars.
You are my gift of mercy and when you are near. My heart is brave and I believe. Life can be okay.

Two people sat together by the Lake St. Clair holding hands and watching the lake dance.  Falling into perfect silence and are content with the seconds where love is wild and free.

                          John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[ReedWrite]

Not just words, Coyote...beautiful words. Tender words. Hopeful words. Loving words. I think I loved the last line best: Falling into perfect silence and are content with the seconds where love is wild and free. Perfect silence. I love that. When two people can be toegether, without the rattle of conversation as a distractor...when they can just BE, without the need to clarify, qualify, or quantify...then it is perfect. Perfect silence! Nicely done!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.

[Rebecca Leigh]

They may be just words, but they are exquisite

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Rebecca. I appreciate the comment.

[Paul Bell]

Sometimes silence is all you need.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree Paul. In silence. We can know peace.

[Tony Jordan]

Beautiful words Coyote.
Love i...s facing good and bad...together.
The image gently fading out at the end is a true master-stroke.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Tony. I appreciate the kind words.

[Dhaye]

I like the simplicity of the plot. It is simply romantic, as being at the sea/lake with someone special is romantic for me.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. The sea and a special person. Perfect place and and thank you dear friend for reading and the comment.

[YanZeros]

Very romantic! :) Thanks for writing this poetry John Castellenas/Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[YanZeros]

you're welcome! :)

[James]

So good. I don't read you enough, but I am glad I came by here tonight. I love the way you ended this, just sitting in silence and letting love take over.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you James. I appreciate the comment.

[iliOZ]

a bit...sugary for my taste, but it is you nonetheless

[Coyote Poetry]

Sort of sweet and I appreciate the comment.