My Winter love

A re-write

My Winter love

A Poem by Coyote Poetry

Cold days seem to bring people closer.

My Winter love.

I whispered your sweet name in the twilight of the midnight hours.
My sweet dreams brought your beautiful face to my memory.

I dreamed of our blissful nights.

Our sweet and desperate kisses led us to the paradise of the innocence.
Opening a passion that grew with each tender touch.

My Winter love.
You came to me on a cold December day.
You brought me into your raging torrent, my siren.

We tried to burn away the passion in a hurricane second.
Desperately trying  to satisfy the desire and the want of the flesh.
That can’t be fulfilled.

My desire increased with each wild dance.
In our fire of emotion and sexual battle, we found a dark paradise.

You became my only wish and need.

I heard a soft knock at my door.
I opened the door.

My beauty, my blue eye Angel with six wine coolers is standing with beautiful smile and tempting face. I wrapped  my arms around her.

We shared sweet kisses and warm embraces leading us to our secret place.
Where Lover’s lay nude. Heart and mind free.

I whispered to  my beautiful lady.
I have found you again.

I’m your and
you are my ecstasy.

I love all of you.

Coyote
4 April 2009

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

I enjoyed reading this. Great flow and imagery.
"My beauty, my blue eye Angel with six wine coolers is standing with beautiful smile and tempting face."
This is an amazing line!
Most would think of an Angel with wings, but you said wine coolers (I got it of course) it was a good twist in the logical group of nouns.
Tyfs!

[Coyote Poetry]

Some nouns are more tasty and tempting. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

:) You're very much welcome.

[Fairy Khan]

Wonderful use of imagery. I really enjoyed reading this sweet and passionate tale.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Akshat♥]

So much love and passion in this peace. The way you write shows the nature of you. Keep writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[wordman]

in our lives we have several encounters,but there is always that one
that we dream of most..a beautiful write of feelings and emotions

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you wordman for reading and the comment.

[barleygirl]

This seems to be a bit different from your usual postings. This is more like poetry, whereas many of your postings are poetic, for sure, but more like stories. I love the way you wrote this . . . starting out with a soft gentle attraction which grows into passion as the poem continues. I definitely love the way body heat feels on a cold winter day *wink! wink!*

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear friend. Cold days make us need warm body near. Thank you for reading and the nice comments.

[Cobblestone Traveler]

This is beautifully sensual; perfectly capturing the raw passion that spills out when connected to someone you love intensely. "We tried to burn away the passion in a hurricane second." Such a great line. Excellent job.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Melinda McQueen]

A lovely write which leaves me wishing I had a love like that.
What a wonderful feeling. To be close to someone.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Melinda. We must find this place and hold on. If this place is forgotten in a relationship. Love will fade away.

[Melinda McQueen]

Yeah. I'm heartbroken right now. Love shouldn't hurt but sadly it does.

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand. When I was young. Poor luck with love till I met my wife when I was 36 years old.

[andrew mitchell]

John, a lovely romantic write my friend, I do think you should write romance novels for these pieces do reignite the longings of that special closeness one shares between two. I feel like I'm missing out on these James Bond wining and dining experiences with exotic women. Such beauty in our opposites! Thanks for sharing my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

One day when I find time. I may. Thank you Andrew for reading and the comment.

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Your ravenous heart, ever dreamy in the poetry of love :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lynn. Old memories become gold.

[Valentine]

John, ever the lover, when you were younger I bet you drove the ladies crazy. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

The ladies drove me crazy and I didn't mind. Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment.

[Valentine]

You are a bit to hip for a married grand dad. Kathie