All my love

Just words and amazing song.

   All my love(Short poetry for love)


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                     I  knew

We danced, we loved.
I loved your perfect face and I loved your anger.
You were my sea and my wildflowers fields.
I knew the sea cannot be tamed and the wildflowers grow where they will.
I wanted to be drunk on your kiss and make the night never end.
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                     Midnight confessions

Lover's tryst the kiss and the embrace.
They worship the night and they allow
the Dangerous darkness to lead them to a river of fathom love and wishful dreams.
Love sought in the mist of wine and song.
Just deadly dance leading to morning goodbye.

                         Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[Manu]

Beautiful way of expressing 'Love'.. I really like the essence of this poem.
Your style of writing is completely unique which easily captures the readers interest.
I really like these two lines a lot.
( You were my sea and my wildflowers fields.
I knew the sea cannot be tamed and the wildflowers grow where they will.)
They are not mere words, they are pious emotions shelled in the form of words.
Thanks for sharing
keep it up :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Gorthi. I appreciate the comment.

[Ayushi Beura]

Unique, beautiful, fascinating....superb poem, you have decorated such beautiful words that is just enough to describe love...Enjoyed your poem

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ayushi. You are very kind.

[Adam Adams]

lovely write.
you open your heart & let it speak out or beat well in such romantic words. nice work!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Adams. I appreciate the comment.

[Anindita Janhabee]

opening is so beautiful...
wow.. but sad too..
beginning with sweet, ending with sad..
I liked the format..
just amazing thoughts. .
(lots of support)
keep writing sir...
Anindita : )

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Anindita. I appreciate the kind words.

[Anindita Janhabee]

most welcome... : )

[Daisy]

"I loved your perfect face and I loved your anger.
You were my sea and my wildflowers fields.
I knew the sea cannot be tamed and the wildflowers grow where they will."

Mesmerizing lines. The first few lines itself captivated me with a pure sense of love. I completely love the way you have expressed your feelings with a blend of both emotional maturity and innocence.
Kudos and God Bless :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Daisy. I appreciate the comment.

[1VJ]

I love the first verse immensely, made my head swoon. Second is pensively forlorn. Poignantly beautiful Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Paloma. I appreciate your comment.

[Ashwin Shanker]

I don't know if it is two parts, but I loved the first part... I felt the wildflowers and the sea angle had a lot of potential to it, you should have added some more lines there. Loved the visual play in it.

It is tough to write about love. I appreciate the courage that you took... This is written from the heart, one can feel it when it is... Good job

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ashan. I'm a epic writer and I tried to write short poetry. A change of pace.

[Ardra]

I loved your perfect face and I loved your anger.
You were my sea and my wildflowers fields.

each poem is pure expression of love you have shared for each individual.. such a sweet way you express all the details of it... i would love to do it someday when i retire... recall the stories..maybe am not too good at poetry..lets see :) always love reading your tales

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe I got better with age and help. The Writer's cafe kind people had made me better. I like honest opinions. You are talented and you will become better. Just live, have fun and travel. The stories shall come.

[Ara Mosby]

I think "just words" isn't quite an apt explanation for this one... Beautiful words, moving words, emotionally charged words... I think what I liked most was the opening - "I knew" - because it almost gave a wistful sense of loss before I even really got into the poem itself. That caught me in the heart.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ara. I appreciate the kind words.

[Philip Muls]

The wildflowers grow where they will. Powerful image.

your poem has great flow John, well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Phillip. I appreciate the comment.