We danced, we loved. I loved your perfect face and I loved your anger. You were my sea and my wildflowers fields. I knew the sea cannot be tamed and the wildflowers grow where they will. I wanted to be drunk on your kiss and make the night never end. ----
Midnight confessions
Lover's tryst the kiss and the embrace. They worship the night and they allow the Dangerous darkness to lead them to a river of fathom love and wishful dreams. Love sought in the mist of wine and song. Just deadly dance leading to morning goodbye.
Beautiful way of expressing 'Love'.. I really like the essence of this poem.
Your style of writing is completely unique which easily captures the readers interest.
I really like these two lines a lot.
( You were my sea and my wildflowers fields.
I knew the sea cannot be tamed and the wildflowers grow where they will.)
They are not mere words, they are pious emotions shelled in the form of words.
Thanks for sharing
keep it up :-)
Beautiful way of expressing 'Love'.. I really like the essence of this poem.
Your style of writing is completely unique which easily captures the readers interest.
I really like these two lines a lot.
( You were my sea and my wildflowers fields.
I knew the sea cannot be tamed and the wildflowers grow where they will.)
They are not mere words, they are pious emotions shelled in the form of words.
Thanks for sharing
keep it up :-)
opening is so beautiful...
wow.. but sad too..
beginning with sweet, ending with sad..
I liked the format..
just amazing thoughts. .
(lots of support)
keep writing sir...
Anindita : )
"I loved your perfect face and I loved your anger.
You were my sea and my wildflowers fields.
I knew the sea cannot be tamed and the wildflowers grow where they will."
Mesmerizing lines. The first few lines itself captivated me with a pure sense of love. I completely love the way you have expressed your feelings with a blend of both emotional maturity and innocence.
Kudos and God Bless :)
I don't know if it is two parts, but I loved the first part... I felt the wildflowers and the sea angle had a lot of potential to it, you should have added some more lines there. Loved the visual play in it.
It is tough to write about love. I appreciate the courage that you took... This is written from the heart, one can feel it when it is... Good job
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8 Years Ago
Thank you Ashan. I'm a epic writer and I tried to write short poetry. A change of pace.
I loved your perfect face and I loved your anger.
You were my sea and my wildflowers fields.
each poem is pure expression of love you have shared for each individual.. such a sweet way you express all the details of it... i would love to do it someday when i retire... recall the stories..maybe am not too good at poetry..lets see :) always love reading your tales
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8 Years Ago
I believe I got better with age and help. The Writer's cafe kind people had made me better. I like .. read moreI believe I got better with age and help. The Writer's cafe kind people had made me better. I like honest opinions. You are talented and you will become better. Just live, have fun and travel. The stories shall come.
I think "just words" isn't quite an apt explanation for this one... Beautiful words, moving words, emotionally charged words... I think what I liked most was the opening - "I knew" - because it almost gave a wistful sense of loss before I even really got into the poem itself. That caught me in the heart.
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words.
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