Did I tell you how thankful I'm for you, my dear Grandparent? You gave me shelter, shared meals and wisdom. You taught me how to live. To appreciate life, nature and laughter. Today I wish I told you more often. I loved you and without you. My life would of been a poorly lit journey. I feel your strength in my words and how I live.
Did I tell you how thankful I'm for you, my children? You gave me reasons to never give-up or give-in. I learned after holding my first child in my arms. I had true reasons to be alive. I watched you grow into strong men and women. You have honored me with your success. Greatest reward of a life. To have your children standing strong and proud. I wish to tell you often. I love you and I hope life is fair and sweet for you.
Did I tell you how thankful I'm for you, my grandchildren? In my old age. You are my joy and laughter. You give me reasons to know; stay alert and strong. I want to show you new places and things. I love to see your eyes filled with joy and happiness. Days at the park, beaches and baseball games. Our time. I pray I become like my grandfather. A patience teacher. I pray I become like my grandmother. Never a negative word and always words of love and praise shared for us.
Tomorrow is my birthday. Once, old age don't scared me. Today old age is welcome. I have learn. Real wealth is many grandchildren at my feet and love near. True wealth is having a open door for friends and the family. Lead with concern, kindness and love.
Another lovely piece of heartfelt writing, a dedication to those who have loved and inspired, and those who are loved and inspiring still.
I admire your dedication to your family and the wisdom and patience you hope to impart on them. With age, comes great wisdom and knowledge, born from the tales of those who came before and from a lifetime of experience. Only the ignorant would fail to listen to the words of the wise.
As always, heart-on-the-sleeve writing. Wisdom for the ages. Good work.
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8 Years Ago
Thank you Doodley. Old age make us wish we spend more time with missed elders.
This is so beautiful, even when I enjoy poetry I don't often feel emotional, but if I were to pick one and only one poem that truly pulls at the heart strings it would be this.
I am still young but I think much of my family and where I might be if it weren't for them, and how thankful I am to still have my parents with me.
I think of my grandparents who have passed on their wisdom to my mom and my father and how that wisdom was passed onto me and my sister and how I'll always remember that prayer, love, forgiveness and time, are all such precious and powerful gifts and understanding that is why I am still grateful and faithful today.
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8 Years Ago
We need our elders. Grandparent, uncles and aunts. Our true teachers. Thank you for reading and the .. read moreWe need our elders. Grandparent, uncles and aunts. Our true teachers. Thank you for reading and the kind words.
Simply put amazing.
I agree with the ending, very heartfelt piece. As for grandparents...How could I forget those few beautiful days... From early morning to late afternoon... spent with grandpa, fishing, a few long walks in the mountains, forests...
all gone by now. but the memories remain.
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8 Years Ago
The memories of kind voices. Show us the way to becoming the kind voices in other people lives. Tha.. read moreThe memories of kind voices. Show us the way to becoming the kind voices in other people lives. Thank you for reading and the comment.
it is quite person specific.so I can't say that I can relate with each line compactly but sure emotion is true and strong that is reflected well through words.a good style while words are strong.
Beautiful poetry John! Leaves truthful telling impressions upon me which richly reflect your character. You write with such heart and that is such a blessed quality! I like this so much. Rach x
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8 Years Ago
Thank you Rach. Life is better when the family is near.
Also, John, As we learned from our grandparents,
our grands can learn tolerance and forgiveness
from our example.
We as grandparents can also learn from our grands...
to wake up each morning looking for beauty and adventure.
truly, Pat
dear John, you have captured the pleasure
of aging... watching your children succeed and
your grandchildren learn that being noble is being rich.
Having friends to share laughter is a silver lining. truly, Pat
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8 Years Ago
I agree Pat. Without our children and grandchildren. How would we spend our time? Thank you dear fri.. read moreI agree Pat. Without our children and grandchildren. How would we spend our time? Thank you dear friend for leaving a positive comment.
8 Years Ago
dear John... As we age, each moment is
a treasure... like the star sapphire,
we see .. read moredear John... As we age, each moment is
a treasure... like the star sapphire,
we see beauty in children's eyes... Amen
Last, but not least... Happy Birthday, dear John...
and many more ... May nature's scent be .. read moreLast, but not least... Happy Birthday, dear John...
and many more ... May nature's scent be lovely
as Christian Dior scents and the sweet song of
the Nightingale give you peace and love... truly, Pat
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words.
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