With you

just words

tatifox

coyotepoet

        With you

I saw the four corners of the world seeking perfect place.

I wanted to observe the rare views of a lucky life.

I stood in the clouds upon the giant mountains.

I free-climbed to secret waterfalls and found hidden places of peace.

I followed the path of Hemingway and I learn what he knew.

I learned. Love touched make our world go around in perfect rotation.

With you my love. Sitting alone without the concern of me near.

Is the perfect place to be.

               John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[LM]

Awwww! Your beautiful words and gentle flow knows no bounds. It reaches far. Connecting with the hearts of anyone that is in love with the idea of love and would go to the ends of the earth to realize and expeience that wonderful feeling. You communicate such adoration and passion in your writing. I love it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you LM. I appreciate the kind words.

[LM]

Your welcome!! Keep up the amazing writing! ! I just posted chapter 3 finally!! I really hope you enjoy it. Thank you so much for your support and encouraging thoughts. I look forward to your opinion!

[Coyote Poetry]

I will be back Wednesday night. I'm working my four 13 hour days. I will read this day.

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

It's not what you do or where you go, but who you do those things with. You've captured that so well and gave it so much meaning in this short but perfectly written poem. Great job, my friend. I hope all is well, Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm fine and thank you Michael for reading and the comment.

[Susheel Sharma]

A true wanderer who could get a true guide. Very fortunate indeed!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree and thank you for reading.

[Tate Morgan]

I have to wonder if there isn't a real truth to this as i know you have led a good life. Perhaps you have been where few have tread? It does a man good to travel when he is young and learn the truths of his existance

[Coyote Poetry]

All of us had opportunities to have a good life. Your life was set-up by solid people. We are just bricks expanding and learning. I was lucky become my father told me. Travel, test life and love many women. Thank you Tate for reading and the comment.

[Tate Morgan]

You are welcome I am at that point now where it is time to advise my own son. I have to let go of my fears for him and wish him a good life

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to do. But we must.

[Tate Morgan]

Yes I agree. He might think as a young man that with age comes a plateau of learning and growing. It is not true. There is no end to evolution.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right my friend. I'm still leaning.

[Lydia Shutter]

What a gloriously romantic write this is, John. When you know you are in the perfect place with another person, you have found the right one. Loved the mystery of "secret waterfalls". Well written, my friend. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lydia. I appreciate the comment.

[Susheel Sharma]

Romantic indeed.

[barleygirl]

This is so meaningful & harkens about where I'm at in my life now. I also did many adventures with many beloved friends, but in the end, I'm content to be in my present power place just taking in the simple pleasures of my friends, pets, & God's blessings. I love your descriptions of where you've been & what you've done, here in this poem, & in many others of yours. We always have the memories of these adventures to spice up our somewhat less adventurous older age, huh? *smile* (((HUGS)))

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes we do my friend and thank you for reading and the comment.

[Pryde Foltz]

You and I share a lot of commonality. I too was drawn to visit the places of Papa Ernesto:) A great write, Coyote:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I saw his Paris. Roamed highway one many times. I wish to have more time in South America. His logic. Simple and true. Enjoy life.

[Papaya]

You describe love so well Coyote. This is very expressive, such lovely feelings from your romantic heart.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[MOON]

Lyrical write love is the perfect place to be.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Moon. I appreciate the comment.

[H.L. Cerveise]

You say just words; however, my fellow warrior poet they are for sure more than that. I loved it. The line, "...to secret waterfalls and found hidden places of peace..." I think I love that line the most. I just felt a level of peace throughout the entire reading experience.

Well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. We need secret places and unknown journey.

[Maxim Lewis]

Beautiful, in this world and the other. Earth and allegory.
To the anima. To the goddess. To Gaia.
Truth, it seems, is always paradoxical. You've captured that here.

A pleasure to read.

Maxim.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Maxim. I appreciate the comment.