With you

just words

tatifox

coyotepoet

        With you

I saw the four corners of the world seeking perfect place.

I wanted to observe the rare views of a lucky life.

I stood in the clouds upon the giant mountains.

I free-climbed to secret waterfalls and found hidden places of peace.

I followed the path of Hemingway and I learn what he knew.

I learned. Love touched make our world go around in perfect rotation.

With you my love. Sitting alone without the concern of me near.

Is the perfect place to be.

               John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[LM]

Awwww! Your beautiful words and gentle flow knows no bounds. It reaches far. Connecting with the hearts of anyone that is in love with the idea of love and would go to the ends of the earth to realize and expeience that wonderful feeling. You communicate such adoration and passion in your writing. I love it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you LM. I appreciate the kind words.

[LM]

Your welcome!! Keep up the amazing writing! ! I just posted chapter 3 finally!! I really hope you enjoy it. Thank you so much for your support and encouraging thoughts. I look forward to your opinion!

[Coyote Poetry]

I will be back Wednesday night. I'm working my four 13 hour days. I will read this day.

[Irenic]

The lines are so beautiful. Especially the last lines felt deep to me.
Thanks for sharing :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Irenic. I appreciate the comment.

[Irenic]

welcome...................................:)

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

Wow! I must confess, this poem creates a mental picture of a superfine and fresh love. I mean when love is real and geniue. "Love touched make our world go around in perfect rotation." I love it. Well done, Sir!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the kind words.

[Tomás Ó C..]

Beautiful write, is it just a verse or about a lady in particular?

[Coyote Poetry]

It was. For a beautiful German girl name Brigitte. Thank you Tomas for reading and the comment.

[softlyfall]

I see you, in the clouds on the mountain, a dreamer, even perhap a seer, certianly a romantic.
I like this, just words.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. You are very kind. I appreciate the comment.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Where in this world..is Joy ?
It's right here..beside the one we love..


Nice.......Sweet..............

Jazzy

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jazzy. I appreciate the comment.

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome.............. Jazz

[mou]

I like the words , you've used here to describe the feelings..
and that person is really special for whom we even want to discover the beauty of a casual daily scenario..
It is very sweet and strong as well .......

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you mou. I appreciate the comment.

[Raylene]

Very beautiful I must say a true love poem for as human no matter what we do our highest prize is of finding a mate.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree and thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Raylene]

Anytime my dear writer

[Ruth]

There is nothing more beautiful than such sentiments and the feeling of utopia in the heart. The woven essence of all that is right in the world. This is stunning and the visuals give the reader such a warm smile :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. When the love is right. Perfect place to be.

[Healing Star]

Coyote, are you from Michigan, I grew up in Champion Mi, population 300 solute. Near Ishpeming and Marquette in the Upper Peninsula - God's Country

A little work and this one will be beautiful, I know you just through this down, and I won't belabor you with details. Real pretty picture of love you painted.

[Coyote Poetry]

I know Ishpeming. I loved the Upper Michigan. I lived 5 year in Iron Mountain. I live in Clinton Twp. now. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Healing Star]

small world, my uncle lived in Sterling Heights for years, we'd visit and swim in his in ground pool and go to the malls and zoo, and Tiger games. I remember being above 3rd base in the very top row on the upper deck one year in the old stadium - in the 60's , memories, where do they Run.

[Coyote Poetry]

Clinton Twp. is still a nice place to live. A lot of good activities near.