Write on me

Just words

        
                    Write on me


The California Summer nights are here and you are with me my lover.
I told the night stars. Thank you for the  sacred mornings awaking with you near and the
long darkness of the night where we can lay bare and free.

I trace your skin with content hands and fingers.
Using my fingers to spread gentle lotion on long legs, perfect skin and wanting flesh.
You whisper to me. Sweet Poet, write on me. Make me a story to be never forgotten.
Make the sleeping Gods envy us and allow our love to become a eternal place for us and memory.

Your yearning eyes show me the perfect shade of love.
Where love can be wild and free.
In the deep midnight hours.
Two faithful hearts are finding the heat of love where captive hearts can be safe.
                          John Castellenas/Coyote

                                     

Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[Aswin R Prasad]

Great poem.
"You whisper to me. Sweet Poet, write on me. Make me a story to be never forgotten."
I love these lines.. Maybe you've meant it literally but I got a different idea. But that's what poetry is about.. right ? :)
I thought of this line as how one of the lover is totally blank and is ready to have a new life from the other. He/she wants to have memories which are to be treasured. Nothing but him/her.

Keep writing more. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Aswin. Poetry is the freedom of words to come alive and create memories of places and people.

[Lyn Anderson]

Another soft and sensual romantic write. Smooth as butter, your words melt on the tongue.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you again dear friend. I appreciate the comment.

[zunie frost]

It's lovely and do romantic ..... every word is perfectly choosen .... I love the theme of your work ....great job

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you zumie. I appreciate the comment.

[zunie frost]

Welcome my friend

[Pryde Foltz]

A wonderfully sensual and romantic write, Coyote:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Pryde. I appreciate the comment.

[Ardra]

You whisper to me. Sweet Poet, write on me. Make me a story to be never forgotten.
Make the sleeping Gods envy us and allow our love to become a eternal place for us and memory...... beautiful lines .... lovely poetry as usual :) thanks for sharing

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ria. I appreciate the comment.

[Lydia Shutter]

The desire is so strong in your words, John. The passion, the sensual scenario....it is all so real. The imagery you employ is great. "Write on me".....what a great line. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

The song gave me motivation and thank you Lydia for reading and the comment.

[MandaBear]

I like this lot. I love the concept of this poem. Just so amazing as always!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you MandaBear. I appreciate the comment.

[UnapologeticPoet]

Lovely! The style and emotions that I can get from this are powerful. Very well written!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Adrianna. I appreciate the comment.

[mou]

and you write a sweet poem..
I believe that writing has it's worth for feelings and specially due to someone about whom we write..
and this poem reflects this too...
lovely work!
thanks for sharing with us...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you mou. I appreciate your kind words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as poets we may write on the skin, but hopefully that writing will penetrate further and reach the heart and soul---this reminded me of my loves in youth---every one having a stronger tan than the next.

j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jacob and I agree. To be able to write on skin, heart and mind. Rarely done.