Write on me

Just words

        
                    Write on me


The California Summer nights are here and you are with me my lover.
I told the night stars. Thank you for the  sacred mornings awaking with you near and the
long darkness of the night where we can lay bare and free.

I trace your skin with content hands and fingers.
Using my fingers to spread gentle lotion on long legs, perfect skin and wanting flesh.
You whisper to me. Sweet Poet, write on me. Make me a story to be never forgotten.
Make the sleeping Gods envy us and allow our love to become a eternal place for us and memory.

Your yearning eyes show me the perfect shade of love.
Where love can be wild and free.
In the deep midnight hours.
Two faithful hearts are finding the heat of love where captive hearts can be safe.
                          John Castellenas/Coyote

                                     

Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[Aswin R Prasad]

Great poem.
"You whisper to me. Sweet Poet, write on me. Make me a story to be never forgotten."
I love these lines.. Maybe you've meant it literally but I got a different idea. But that's what poetry is about.. right ? :)
I thought of this line as how one of the lover is totally blank and is ready to have a new life from the other. He/she wants to have memories which are to be treasured. Nothing but him/her.

Keep writing more. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Aswin. Poetry is the freedom of words to come alive and create memories of places and people.

[Raylene]

For a male you write love stories beautiful not that men cannot yet few like you and Richard and avinash can do it with elegance Grace yet keep the power in the message well done

[Coyote Poetry]

You are very kind and thank you Raylene for reading and the comment.

[Raylene]

Anytime coyote you have caught my attention

[Firemay]

That was beautifully written, well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[SJ Mullins]

These are not just words, darlin'. This is absolutely beautiful. A lovely write indeed. I enjoyed reading it. You write so eloquently. Thank you for sharing it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the kind words.

[SJ Mullins]

You are most welcome. :)

[Ehra Khan]

These are not just words. They're musical. ..just flowing out of you. I could relate to this piece. its lovely

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Inaya. I appreciate the comment.

[Ehra Khan]

you're welcome:)

[DAVID VELDE]

Man, I love this. Brings back the passionate memories with the many I thought were my soul mates. So sweet it was. Dude, you've taken foreplay to a new level. Thanks!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you David. I appreciate the comment.

[Papaya]

I love this Coyote! It makes me think of all those times I trailed a finger to write words like "l love you" across the back.

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad you liked and thank you for reading.

[Papaya]

You're welcome!

[barleygirl]

This brings back memories I'd forgotten all about! Rubbing on suntan lotion & writing on the other person! Oh how whimsical & romantic those days were & you've captured it here perfectly. I remember trying to guess what the other person wrote. These guessing games were such precious ways to break the ice and get to know what's on the other person's mind. This is a great throwback to the younger days.

[Coyote Poetry]

The days of youth. Became more sweeter with distance. Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment.

[Dave]

I agree, it's so easy to remember the joys of our youth. Memory is kind to us and makes it difficult to remember those things that happened that "memory" has made it easy to forget.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right my friend. Good days make the bad days less painful.

[Usman Muhammad]

Wow...
A very romantic and sensual poem which touches the heart of the reader in a very very romantic way.
You have your own way of playing with words. Well done Sir

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Usman. I appreciate the comment.