The first time I saw your face-Two short poems

Just words

                          
            The first time I saw your face-Two short poems.


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                              Paint me

Elegant lady told me. Life is hard and the night is long my love.
We must bathe in the kindness of the long midnight.
Kind night allowed us to adrift in the safety of tender embrace and sweet kiss.
We must paint a perfect picture of two lovers finding the endless path of the sage of real love.
Please paint me perfect, for when your love is near. You are my song and my will.

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                           Your face

My kind muse is quiet. The sweet red wine and the morning daybreak brought her peaceful rest.
I caressed her face with appreciating fingers. I lay my head against her  breasts,  hearing her beating heart. Her kind embrace took me to perfect place. Where love become infinite and we abandon  fear or regret. I looked at her face and I see landscape of beautiful journey and safe place to rest. I whispered to lady midnight. Thank you for an Angel for a man who only knew darkness and despair.
                                      John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Meshalini]

Great work,I love your poetry..it is really beautiful and lovely. Keep writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Meshalini. I appreciate the comment.

[Meshalini]

Your welcome Coyote....

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful words, John. I like the second one most, however they both are good. :) Rudi

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Rudi. Best days are when we are wrapped-up in the embrace of love.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Very sweet and gentle...instead of resorting to frenzied, lustful lovemaking (commonly seen when meeting a charming woman) to feel better, I like how this experience talks about laying in comfort together to gain inner peace. Thanks for posting. xx

[Coyote Poetry]

Love is 50 years together and content. Holding hands and daily kisses. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[William Liston]

Great work. I loved the imagery.

-William Liston

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you William for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[andrew mitchell]

For "just words" a lovely gentle, touching write John. Almost reminiscent in your narative style.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Andrew for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Lydia Shutter]

Tender, gentle romance. "You are my song and my will." what a glorious line this is. Your words are beautifully written. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lydia. I appreciate the comment my friend.

[aLittlePain]

"Just words" that are beautifully formed with a passionate heart. This piece paints a landscape littered in love and tenderness.

Ngā mihi maioha
Rach x

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Rach. I appreciate the comment.

[John]

A lovely, beautiful, lingering moments that enthrall the majestic beauty of love that can paint even the slightest details with passion and honesty!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you John. I appreciate the comment.

[teamsnow]

well done; nice way of jotting down your thoughts in an organized manner

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.