If It Be Your Will

Just words

               If It Be Your Will

My dear Winter love. I held you so tightly in the  long cold Winter days and nights.

You confessed love and need to me in the safety of locked doors.

You were my Juliet, my savior and I was your Romeo. I was going to save and protect you.

You were my beautiful muse. Your bare skin against my skin, your lips upon my lips. Kisses so warm and sweet.

Made the long nights become warm and safe. I knew we held the utopia of two dreamers who held love over life.

You told me often. "If it be your will.  I will run nude and reckless for you into your wanting arms. I'm your love and you are my love. I want us to become water and fire. Combining together. Create wild storm than a place of calmness."

I remember painting your tender skin with touch and kiss. Roaming perfect secret valleys and hidden corners where lovers fear not the night. Just the day. I told you.

I want you near, my lover. I need your lips upon my lips and  I need your hands upon my heart  caressing me with sweet words and atonement of perfect embrace and no broken promises. After the day is done. You are my only wish and my only need.

You bring me closer and whispered. "If it be your will. I'm here for you  and I won't leave you sweet Johnnie. Love is enough for us and we must embrace the nights with open heart and fearless song.

                           John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

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Life and love. Wisdom in words.

Another beautiful tale of love....all its emotions, longings, caresses, kisses and sighs.
Once again, i am familiar with the expressions of love you have deftly described in this piece. The wanting. The needing. The desire. The promises of neverending love. I know them all, too. They are a very powerful concoction. The true essence of life.
You have weaved another magical love story, once again, Coyote. Endearing writing as always.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Doodley. I appreciate the comment.

[Kuldeep desai]

very nice........thank you for sharing..........

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Kuldeep for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Ashley Renegade]

Your words flow so smoothly. This was almost Song Of Solomon-esk. Beautiful work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ashley for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

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Very romantic words John:) The song fit perfect:) Well done my friend well done indeed:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.

[??????]

Welcome John:)

[Rebecca Leigh]

Wow, such beautiful sentiments. Your muse must be honored

[Coyote Poetry]

We need our muses. Without our muses. What would we write? Thank you Rebecca for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

This is quite a nice work of romance which takes your journey through the romantic forests of love. Nicely penned. Emotions and feelings and acts of affection have been vividly pictured. Keep writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Usman Muhammad]

Love is life.
You expressed the emotions and feelings of both lovers perfectly. The promises and vows made the poem beautiful.
Well done and keep writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Usman. I appreciate the comment.

[idiotproof--1]

This poem is wonderful. "I want us to become water and fire. Combining together. Create wild storm than a place of calmness." this is my favorite line. I really enjoyed reading this. keep up the good writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Crimson_ish]

I love this piece, I love how there merges with love, fear. We all feel it, when the love that shines upon us, kisses us is so pure, intimate and real, we fear losing it, it's the inevitability of life that scares us, but what is best about this piece is the realization of "Living in the moment". Somewhere I felt this poem embraces nostalgia, I am unsure if it's true, but even if the love is lost the enchantment still lingers, and it's still there, as pure, and innocent, and intimate as it ever was, thank you for this :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate. When we are innocent in love. New places to be found and learn.

[Carolynn]

These are such beautiful words and sentiments coyote - they sing of an absolutely soul lifting love between two people but with your words "I was going to save and protect you" it sounds as though she is now gone, separated for a time perhaps. You can only hope the two will meet again - in another life, where their love can be enjoyed forever! Really beautiful! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Carolynn. I believe rare places of love can be found again.