The color of love

Just words

                             The color of love

Dear lover. You made me come alive.
The fire in you eyes make me wish to swim in your brown eyes and
drown in the the gentleness of your voice.

Your sweet kiss made me find new places to feel and know.
The color of my world turn to multi-colors when we embrace and
we find safety in the warmth of the midnight hours.

You are my brightness and my darkness.
Your slender shoulders moving with the late night song and
your hips wavering slowly to sweet music made my mind and eyes.
See perfection  in light and in darkness.

The shadows dancing of us on the walls making the color of love come alive with scented candles
and our secret love dance. For us to know alone.

Love is shared and worship when the color of love overtake the fear to escape.
True lovers hold on tight, making the night turn to day and
swim forever in the memory. Love was touched by two honest hearts.

                            Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[Emily]

I love the line "The color of my world turn to multi-colors when we embrace and
we find safety in the warmth of the midnight hours." Beautiful word choice throughout the piece. Also, I really like the contrast of "You are my brightness and my darkness." Keep up the great work!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Emily for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Spencer Barker]

John, this poem is very good. It has a nice flow, very romantic, and contains every bit of passion romantic poetry requires. This writing is very impressive. Nice job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Spencer for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Sweet and romantic. Just like the other one I have read from you. What is the color of love? They say it is red, but for me it is white. White as in the purity of the love and heart.
Thank you for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe the color of love is a explosive of color. Mass energy making our mind and heart go wild. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Scrap]

I love the line: love was touched by two honest hearts

This says it all.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Stan Lee]

How does one know so much about love then express it in such a beautiful manner. You never cease to amaze me with your "just words"

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the kind words.

[sonnie ibadah]

it plays a sweet melody in my head, beautiful....

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you sonnie. I like good song. Make me write.

[dan]

John, You always seem to write such romantic thoughts covered in an air of dusky mysticism. Not DARK, just dusky. A lot of your writing that I've read seems to involve a beautiful lady, slow dancing and the dewy feeling of love blossoming...so romantic! Your style of writing is similarly relaxed and low-key, drawing the reader into its umbrella of warmth. I sure wish you would send RRs because I never seem to get to your page as often as I would like. ALWAYS stellar writing awaits behind the door.
Outstanding write as usual. take care...dan

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Dan. I appreciate your time and your comment.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John, I love the shadows dancing on the wall...
a silouette of your passion... simply a smashing poem
of scented candles and secrets. truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Patricia. I appreciate the comment.

[barleygirl]

Beautifully written & packed with imagery, as is typical for your poetry. Thank you for sharing this delightful dreamy waltz to a softly playing orchestra of loving observations. Who wouldn't feel totally honored & blessed to live such an encounter even once?

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Love is rarely given without payment due. Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment.

[Writing Angel]

breathtakingly...amazing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you destini. I appreciate the comment.

[Writing Angel]

well thanks for writing genuinely...as it is from the heart