The perfect sea

Just words

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           The perfect sea

You lifted your red dress and you walked into the sea.

Perfect feet danced with the moving waves.

I looked to the sky and thanked the spirit of life.

Thank you for the gift of perfect beauty.

She blessed my eyes and my heart.

The Gods of sea. Smiled upon us.

The kind wind whispered to me. She is the perfect sea.

Wild and free.

             John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[ghostlyhearts]

I thought this was wonderful!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the kind words.

[DaVoid]

I see what you want to say yet feels disconnected.

[Coyote Poetry]

Okay and thank you for the comment. I do appreciate the comment.

[Frank]

Fantastic aura of calm. The signature in the middle was the cherry, almost like you are literally supporting the words themselves.
Nice poem. Touching sentiment and elegantly put. Bravo.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Frankee for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[MandaBear]

Amazing poem! A definitely has a calmness to it. Love it. Great work as always =)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John... The perfect sea... wild and free.
A sensual poem of beauty... a gift to embrace.
truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Patricia. I appreciate the comment.

[Ken Simm.]

What a superb image this conjours in my mind.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ken for reading and the kind words.

[Hyacinth]

Beutiful and flawless! Wow.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Hyacnith for reading and the kind words.

[Hyacinth]

It's only the truth :)

[Terry O'Leary]

No! I disagree! Far more than "Just words"... a very soothing, seductive poem!! (And the picture's not bad, either... ;-))

[Coyote Poetry]

Good photo can give life to words. Thank you Terry for reading and the comment.

[alifeacoustic]

A perfect picture painted with your words of a perfect sea and a perfect see, beautifully captured.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Sarah Redigan]

Hey Stranger i have not been on for a long while. i have missed reading your work. i love this .. very beautiful

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sarah for reading. Glad to see you pop-up on the screen.

[Sarah Redigan]

I has been a while. how have you been