The perfect sea

Just words

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           The perfect sea

You lifted your red dress and you walked into the sea.

Perfect feet danced with the moving waves.

I looked to the sky and thanked the spirit of life.

Thank you for the gift of perfect beauty.

She blessed my eyes and my heart.

The Gods of sea. Smiled upon us.

The kind wind whispered to me. She is the perfect sea.

Wild and free.

             John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[mou]

Very nice poem..an air of praising someones pure beauty ,flows all around..

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you mou. I appreciate the kind words.

[mou]

It is my pleasure

[Tomás Ó C..]

Lovely poem... hope she liked it...

[Coyote Poetry]

Old memory. She would had. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Samuel Dickens]

Just words--yes, but words that excite the senses and light a small fire of desire and romance.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Samuel. We need the beauty of nature and woman to make the journey of life more kind.

[Scrap]

I love a woman being compared to the sea. Uve inspired me. Hmmmmm

[Coyote Poetry]

Sea and woman. Nice place to know. Thank you for reading.

[andrew mitchell]

Great imagery One can not control the sea but one can only respect the sea. May apply to the red dress sea babe!!! An excellent write John.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right my friend and thank you for reading and the comment.

[andrew mitchell]

you are welcome good luck on the baywatch lifesaving!!:):)

[matpat]

I liked this poem, I love your imagery in your words!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Maddie. I appreciate the comment.

[Danny-Dark0]

Very evocative imagery and a beautiful metaphor, nature and humanity intertwined, almost as one, the great coalescence of life and why we should take these moments to appreciate it. Again a very well constructed and beautiful poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Dan for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[A hare off]

A mesmerizing feel to this wonderful poem. I could hear the melodic rhythm of the waves as I read this.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Carolynn]

It's so wonderful to have those feelings for someone, loving her but allowing her to be wild and free - sounds perfect! Thanks for sharing this Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Carolynn for reading and the comment.

[Chuck]

Love the emotional imagery here. I love when the muse brings beautiful thoughts. I dig this.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Chuck. I appreciate the comment.