I adored you

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I ADORED YOU

December 29, 2015

 

 

 

 

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                    I adored you

I loved you near and afar.

I loved your soft voice and beautiful face.

I stood near you and we held hands and shared drink.

We traveled California One and I watched your dance

on the quiet beaches.

We found private places where you laid bare and free.

I could see a woman I beloved in silence .

But my need for you.

You never felt.

Because I didn’t show you, who I was

All I wanted was you,

Near but far away.

Today I’m alone without you.

And you,

so far away from me.

Today my only  wish,

is that I told you I adored you.

John Castellenas/Coyote

 

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[softlyfall]

First of all, I LOVE that ring she wears in the photo, double rings, chained in a handcuff allusion, devotion complete.
I see you sitting rapt on the sunset-gilded beach, watching her dance as if time slowed down and the moment was eternal. Too often we think it is, and never speak the moment out loud, then regret it when laughing time speeds back up and it is too late.
This is what I read/heard/understood and this I loved.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. Some people. Even not touched or known. Their energy for life make you wish for wild dance and song.

[W R Stowe]

How many times that happens in life because we remain silent about how we truly feel I can see why you would adore her though

Bill

[Coyote Poetry]

I bet a lot for most people. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[W R Stowe]

You are quite welcome work keeps me away so much now days

[jesserose99]

Sometimes it is almost impossible to tell the one true person that we want how we truly feel because our heart beat for them is almost too powerful. beautiful words Coyote. i can feel the yearning and ache.

[Coyote Poetry]

A old poem and a good memory. Thank you Jesse for reading and the comment.

[eli mercuree rue]

Some love isnt meant to meet our expectations rather show us the many dimensions of our soul being.
Peace and love to you, thanks for sharing

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you LE. I appreciate the comment.

[abderrahmane dakir]

So beautiful poem, filled with love. Thank you for sharing this great poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Indeed beautiful words for a beautiful person. Thanks for sharing this.

[Coyote Poetry]

Just reading old journals today. I found this poem in a 40 year old journal I wrote in 1977. Thank you for reading and the comment my friend.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

If we do not take a chance and go for the one we love then they will find someone who will... yep been there, missed out on that.

[Coyote Poetry]

The one I missed out on was just as pretty. An Army nurse name Gail. Almost six foot tall and wild. Thank you for reading and the comment my friend.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome sir.