Blushing beauty laughed at my words. I told her. Her eyes, her lips. Only wish I hold dear and holy to be able to see and kiss.
Her eyes beckon me close and I dwell in her beauty of her eyes. Us holding kind silence content with the sea near and the contention of hands and heart.
She told me. I love your faithful heart and you have captured me in your passion for living and me.
She gave me sweet kisses and held me in warm embrace. I whispered. Those eyes, those lips. Sacred place and dream for a lucky man.
Probably, you are seemed like a Romantic writer who cares of women's beauty much more than their pleasurable nights. Sounds interesting. Very deep and poetic ...very poetic choice of your words is. Their, hair, eyes, lips and ... yeah, much more.. always soothe the heart & take men to anew world - the world of pleasure. Either you crush her real hard so as she could feel how ravaged it could be to be someone's salve or let her control you with full domination so as she could let you feel how wonderful it'd be to be in woman's heart if it's appreciated or admired as well with tranquility. Pure romance you've come up with!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you for the kind words. Woman make us know heaven or hell. Good to swim in both.
9 Years Ago
"Women make us know "Heaven" & "Hell"? Sounds very astounding. I guess, women got ya the pleasure of.. read more"Women make us know "Heaven" & "Hell"? Sounds very astounding. I guess, women got ya the pleasure of both: hell and heaven ... cos, without passing through such zones, no one can bring what's meant to be savored. Very evocative you are. Ye - women bring both hell and heaven. Heaven for those who treat 'em right and hell for those who treat 'em wrong but, somehow, also "right", eventually. Even.. a woman's herself a s**t of both that a man nor men can hardly understand. Sounds interesting. You're quite thoughtful yourself ... it's good to read your "prose".
Geez,
John ,you painted a dreamy kind of love in such few words,
They seem to take the reader away for a long time into dreamy thoughts.
Short words......long Dream
Very Nice ! Thank You
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you dear friend. I appreciate the positive words.
Heh.. I think, an image wasn't the only reason for writing this. You have it in you, writing romantic poetry.
Enjoyed reading it. I'm rating 100, as always my friend.
Probably, you are seemed like a Romantic writer who cares of women's beauty much more than their pleasurable nights. Sounds interesting. Very deep and poetic ...very poetic choice of your words is. Their, hair, eyes, lips and ... yeah, much more.. always soothe the heart & take men to anew world - the world of pleasure. Either you crush her real hard so as she could feel how ravaged it could be to be someone's salve or let her control you with full domination so as she could let you feel how wonderful it'd be to be in woman's heart if it's appreciated or admired as well with tranquility. Pure romance you've come up with!
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you for the kind words. Woman make us know heaven or hell. Good to swim in both.
9 Years Ago
"Women make us know "Heaven" & "Hell"? Sounds very astounding. I guess, women got ya the pleasure of.. read more"Women make us know "Heaven" & "Hell"? Sounds very astounding. I guess, women got ya the pleasure of both: hell and heaven ... cos, without passing through such zones, no one can bring what's meant to be savored. Very evocative you are. Ye - women bring both hell and heaven. Heaven for those who treat 'em right and hell for those who treat 'em wrong but, somehow, also "right", eventually. Even.. a woman's herself a s**t of both that a man nor men can hardly understand. Sounds interesting. You're quite thoughtful yourself ... it's good to read your "prose".
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Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words.
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