Carved memories

Just words

                    Carved memories

I found you holding the roses by the bedroom window.

You  were adoring the falling sun and waiting for the Autumn moon to rise.

I sat with you and I traced tender skin from soft feet to tempting breast.

We whispered words and songs of our day.

We drank Irish coffee, heavy with whiskey and you saddle me.

Legs holding embrace strongly and gifts of long kisses.

I told you. You are so beautiful and perfect.

You whispered to wanting ears. I love you and the sweet talk in the dark.

Our places to carved perfect memories.

John Castellenas/Coyote

Source:thenk you Tumblr and boss90

Author's Note

Good photo help create good poetry.

Reviews

[HippieSoulPunx]

It's always nice to rely on something else (an image or theme or some other kind of prompt) to inspire you. Some people are incredibly creative and never need any outside inspiration to get out of their comfort zone or improve. But even if you don't need to, I think choosing to do so can take your creative mind in a different direction and cause unexpected expressions. This is incredibly beautiful, the imagery is vivid but soft.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like to use Tumblr. Always many things of beauty and mystery to test the mind. I use artwork and my own thoughts. My real muse is song and reading. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Coyote

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah, pictures do give us inspiration. Just like music, and reading other writers. A very well written poem. I could feel the write.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Danny. I appreciate the comment.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John... You would be a perfect
novelist... and a page-turner.
Waiting for the Autumn moon and
the art of saddling ... bring to
life the passion and sing for romance.
truly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

the passion and song for romance... truly, Pat

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Oh...almost forgot to say... You're welcome :)

[Asra Hakak]

mesmerizing piece of writting
^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Asra for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Dak]

strong poem, i loved it. it felt very real to me

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and I appreciate the comment.

[Benson Osuji]

lovely I loved it every bit thanks for sharing

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Benson. I appreciate the comment.

[Benson Osuji]

return the favor

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Amazing. Very well composed Coyote :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.

[LapseOfMind]

Wonderful poetry, full of passion and longing. Well done

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the kind words.

[Sheila Kline]

Sensual and romantic - perfect image to inspire words of passion and beautiful memories!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sheila. I always appreciate your comments.

[Shae]

Magical and beautiful. Thank you fro sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Shae for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[paulina misiewicz]

Beautiful poem John, erotic and romantic, gentle but strong at the same time. The intimate moments reviled with passion and taste. Thanks for sharing your memories!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Paulina. I appreciate the comment.

[Willard Wells]

Beautiful vision of love and devotion. Well penned. I like this very much. Thanks,

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Willard. I appreciate the comment.