Carved memories

Just words

                    Carved memories

I found you holding the roses by the bedroom window.

You  were adoring the falling sun and waiting for the Autumn moon to rise.

I sat with you and I traced tender skin from soft feet to tempting breast.

We whispered words and songs of our day.

We drank Irish coffee, heavy with whiskey and you saddle me.

Legs holding embrace strongly and gifts of long kisses.

I told you. You are so beautiful and perfect.

You whispered to wanting ears. I love you and the sweet talk in the dark.

Our places to carved perfect memories.

John Castellenas/Coyote

Source:thenk you Tumblr and boss90

Author's Note

Good photo help create good poetry.

Reviews

[HippieSoulPunx]

It's always nice to rely on something else (an image or theme or some other kind of prompt) to inspire you. Some people are incredibly creative and never need any outside inspiration to get out of their comfort zone or improve. But even if you don't need to, I think choosing to do so can take your creative mind in a different direction and cause unexpected expressions. This is incredibly beautiful, the imagery is vivid but soft.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like to use Tumblr. Always many things of beauty and mystery to test the mind. I use artwork and my own thoughts. My real muse is song and reading. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Coyote

[Anahat]

Ah! Beautiful imagery and lovely poem as always.
You inspire me everytime I read your work!
Cheers!

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad and thank you for reading and the comment..

[Adiyah]

well said ..but ur poem was enough for d viewers to imagine d photo attachd...anyways nyc poem

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Adiyah for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[steven sundell]

Great idea, using a secondary medium, coupled with creative prose to form an expansive means of that which all art, in my humble opinion, should always seek to find, an ever evolving and always growing form of self expression. Great work. P.s. thank you for your kind words as well as time in reviewing my poem "barely talking". I greatly appreciate it

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the help and you are welcome.

[PoeticChico]

Great piece, thanks for sharing!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Alex for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[lightflower14]

i love this though iys painful such imagination can not be imagined 'cause am a girl.it does not only touch my soul but my heart.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. All of us need place of joy and happiness to reflex on.

[Celie Rose]

Just look at that picture. I can imagine every word you wrote. Thank you for touching my soul with your words.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Celie Rose. I appreciate the comment.

[Connie]

beautifully written, Legs holding embrace strongly and gifts of long kisses- nice

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Connie. I appreciate the comment.

[Ken Simm.]

I feel when I read you John I am seeing real events across a broad spectrum. It takes consumate skill to manipulate the words of romance so well.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ken. I appreciate the comment.

[wordman]

a beautiful write john,the imagery tells the whole story

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[wordman]

you`re welcome john