My eyes adored you

Thank you Frankie Valli and the Four seasons.

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                                    My eyes adored you


My sweet dream, my first dream and my last dream.
I loved you  since you  were my sweet and kind friend.
Always gentle and   sweet  words given to me by you my dear beloved.

 You held my hand walking to school and as we walked in the hallways of the High school..
I remembered your telling me of great dreams and hope.
I loved watching your face as you  sang and danced for me. .
I told you often.  You were so beautiful and perfect.

You laughed  at my words and we danced to song and dance of our time.
I learn as we separated.

My eyes adored you.   I learn words not spoken, burn more than words that were spoken.

                         John Castellenas/Coyote

                            

Author's Note

New words. I hope you like.

Reviews

[Eternal Devotion]

Beautiful. Your words never fail to move me

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Mia. I appreciate the comment.

[Connie]

I love how you write. Simple and to the point. This takes me back.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Connie. The simple and kind memories become sweet dreams in old age.

[Perkele.7885]

It appears that this was a love that was incomplete
a love that was for reasons unknown or not to be
mentioned by the poet here was never to be fully
really realized. His eyes adored her.

[Coyote Poetry]

Old wishes of High School. They do stay with us and thank you for reading and the comment.

[Aphy!]

Beautifully written. Loved it

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Aphiwe for reading and the comment.

[L. Michelle Corp]

"I learn words not spoken, burn more than words that were spoken" A genuine principle, causing both heartbreak and gratitude for the truth that it offers. Thanks for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Rinzin Samdup]

Beautiful lines appended with beautiful song. Bravo!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[DayDreamer1292]

Its beautiful how with only adoring eyes one can speak chapters and volumes! Beautiful work!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Adoring love is forever. To adore someone. Is true love. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Rinzin Samdup]

you welcome mate :)

[Valentine]

It is funny how often we do learn from life experiences without one word ever spoken. Kathie Nice one John. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Kathie. Frankie took me to good days. I do like the old songs.

[E G TEN]

Hello CP, such a cool piece of love in innocents, reminds me of
my old antics back in the days :-) And Love the Song as well,
One of my Mom's favorite :-) very cool Thanks.

[Coyote Poetry]

A great song and thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Beautiful poem.
The innocence of childhood love and the remembrance of those special moments.
Always treasured..
Enjoyed reading this!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jyoti. Young love is the sweetest love.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Indeed! You are welcome.