Killing me softly

Just words

                           Killing me softly
You are my barefoot dream and wish. I have loved you more than anyone or anything
since you came to me in your  Summer dress and whispered a sweet hello.

I watched you dance and sing. You bare feet moving soft and gentle. Your perfect body falling into the song and sweet words.  Your glances of love stole my will to escape. I yearned for lover kiss and the softness of your hands making my heart come alive with your touch.

You knew you capture my heart.  You interlaced my fingers with your fingers and you whispered to wanting ear. "Do you dream of me. Do you dream of me nude and wild my lover. Do you want to fall adrift in the canvas of my soft skin and swim in the ambrosia of the splendor of the kind night."

I told her as I fell into the touch of her silky skin and drifted  into perfume of Summer flower. I will break your heart. Love is a thief and you are a rising star and I'm a mountain. Not moving.

She smiled and she gave me a sweet kiss and  whispered. "My heart is already broken and you allured me with your sweet words of love. Tempting smile and I love the look of love in your eyes. I need someone to make me feel alive. Please kill my sadness dear soldier. Dance and sing with me. Make me know the sweet taste of love."

The Poet bring the  barefoot beauty near and he told her. We are master and slave to love. The day is long and the night is longer. I would be honored to have you near my dear lover. Killing me softly with your love.

                            John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Thank you for reading and the comment.

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

"You are my barefoot dream and wish. I have loved you more than anyone or anything
since you came to me in your Summer dress and whispered a sweet hello."
I really love the way you started this write... perfect descriptions and I felt like immediately I was reading from your point of view :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Aaron. I appreciate the comment.

[Hannah Barwig]

I loved that I could place myself into the story with the descriptive words. The pictures running through my head were great.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Hannah. I appreciate the comment.

[RJ Humphries]

Sweet and sensual. Beautiful!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment.. Good song make us write amazing poetry.

[lightflower14]

that was so lovely and hot

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you lightflower. I appreciate the comment.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well a... I certainly feel the passion in this one. Awesome write, the feeling is very clear and strong through the whole piece. I love it. Painted a nice image, one that I've seen a thousand times, but always fail to have enough of, and always fail to describe it properly... That is love, atleast it feels like it. Nicely done. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

By the way, i think the title is missing an "L" see -> "Killing me softly" and not "Killing me softy"

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the help. I do appreciate.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome :)

[Gee]

Yes,yes,yes,beeeeeeeooooooooooootifullllllllllly done.A perfect combo

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Sammie Jay can sing and thank you for reading and the comment.

[Wordzika]

your piece is beautiful with the words hitting all the right tones !

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Wordzika. I appreciate the comment.

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Sweet, sensual, like a dream moment captured. Very lovely Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Poet. I appreciate the comment.

[Olivia Ansa-Sam]

This is beautiful. A proclamation of a love so strong.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Olivia. I appreciate the comment.

[Pryde Foltz]

Wonderful word and music accompaniment. Great:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this singer. Her energy for song gave me the drive to write. Thank you Pryde for reading and the comment.

[Pryde Foltz]

She is great:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend.

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah, that song, "Killing me softly with his song..." came to mind as I read your words. A barefoot street performer...flowers in her hair and passion in her soul. Your poetry is so very romantic and always filled with loving words. "The ambrosia of the splendor of the kind night" is right here on the page because of your words. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lydia. I appreciate the kind words.