Please stay with me

Just words

                                Please stay with me


She told him. "Sweet baby, the night is cold and lonely. The rain is falling and the storm is coming closer. Please stay with me. We have seen hell and heaven. This is just another bad place we have found tonight . Please hold me close. Let's fall together my darling. "

Pretty woman  allowed her  tears to fall and now two lovers stand at standstill.  Do they hold on or escape? Pretty woman whispered. "The night is so cold and  dark. Ain't nothing for you outside but struggle and people who don't love you, like I do. After a good bye. Maybe we will forget what we were. What will you know and where will you be?

He looked at the rain hitting the window and turned and looked at his sweet love. He remembered when he ran home to her. Held her like she was everything and his alone and only love. Tears begin to fall for him and he told her. You are right my sweetie. We can overcome this. We can't allow the storm and the mistakes to steal the missing pieces we must find. I will stay and I promised.

I won't make you cry no-more. You are all I need and I'm thankful for you. You never gave-up or forgot what we were and can be. I love you my darling.

                          Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

New words. Please enjoy.

Reviews

[Nadia B.]

Really enjoyed the music along with what you had written, this old country vibe with a far better ending! The words "Please stay with me," are just so powerful and echo throughout your whole poem. Please keep writing with such heartfelt passion!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Nadia. I appreciate the comment.

[Veronique]

This is very heartfelt and so very touching my new friend.I so enjoyed stopping by and reading your hearts words today.I will be by to read more of your writing as time allows.Thank you for sharing your lovely writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Veronique for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Jeyanthi]

This just words,
resonates hope and love... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jeyanthi. I appreciate the comment.

[Willard Wells]

Nice words for your love. Beautiful words and sentiment A very good read. Thanks,

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Willard for reading. I appreciate the comment.

[Pryde Foltz]

So nice when both romantic love and trust is found in the same person:) Lovely write John.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Pryde. I appreciate the comment.

[KaoticOrder]

beautiful... something so many couples need to do.

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes you are right and thank you for reading.

[MsJewel]

Absolutly stunning writing my friend :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Julie. I appreciate the kind words.

[Chris]

strong emotions flowing though this one John - real strong.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Chris. I appreciate the comment.

[Stella Armour]

This is beautiful John, a lovely piece of prose writing..

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Stella. I appreciate the comment.

[ANTO]

"He remembered when he ran home to her. Held her like she was everything..." - supremely romantic imagery Coyote - a delightful, short write!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you ANTO. I always appreciate your comment.