She closed her eyes

Good photo create good poetry.

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                          Close your eye my love

The consequences of finding you was to love and need you forever.My red hair muse, you drove me into madness and needed places of  bliss and sweet  kiss..

Do you think of me? I do dream of you.

I dream of locked doors and you and me.

Alone in the darkness. Adrift in kiss and touch.

Dear muse, where are you today?

In the mercy of the sweet dream.

Love was kind and your trembling lips are near, to be touched.

Coyote/John Castellenas

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Author's Note

Just words. I hope you like.

Reviews

[JayceeC]

Very lovely and sweet with just a hint of passion behind it. Not too much, thank goodness, because the pic is so young...lol. did something happen with the line break in the second line. It just seems like it should be two separate lines not one. I've had crazy thing happen on edits though. What is it with red hair? My husband likes it too, but makes do with me...LOL

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I free-write. Some of my poetry could use a edit.

[JayceeC]

I'm guilty of that too John. a lot of times I write directly to the posting screen. The worst is if I do it from my phone because it's hard to edit or even see that you need an edit.

[Valentine]

Thank God for dreams. He gives us back a few moments of time with one that had gone on before. Nice write. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right Valentine. In set-up dreams. All things fall into place. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Kasey Nichole]

I really like your wording here. "I dream of locked doors and you and me" is a brilliant line. I can really relate to your poem and i encourage you to continue writing. Good job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Kasey. I appreciate the comment.

[nightshade]

this is cool. your words flow really well and your message is very sweet.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you and I appreciate the comment.

[Maumil Mehraj]

"Do you think of me? I do dream of you.
I dream of locked doors and you and me." Favorite lines ^_^
This was such a beautiful piece of art, subtle and flowing. Great work!
Maumil

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Maumil. I appreciate the comment.

[andre8664]

The words was very great it speaks to me it was very deep and great when you in love and to please every one with the deep words a love it very much!!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Andre. I appreciate the comment.

[Adam Adams]

Deep words. Love makes the heart writing such prose to someone when it's seemed to be - beloved with tender sensations of tranquility... which takes even the life to the depth / edge of pleasure. Nice poetry. Well written.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Adams. I appreciate the comment.

[SoltreuSolPar]

That sweet muse always brings us into so many different feelings or expressions.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Pryde Foltz]

In the mercy of the sweet dream.
Love was kind and your trembling lips are near, to be touched.

Gorgeous write, Coyote:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Pryde. I appreciate the comment.

[Ruth]

Wow...this is a corker! Beautiful, just beautiful and tenderly poised xo

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Dear Poet. Just using the photo to create better place.