In your lap

In your lap

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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The safety of love. No better place to be.

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                           In your lap

If I lost you.

I would become empty and alone.

When I’m lost and helpless.

I need your kind words and your embrace.

When I fall into the warmth of your lap and

I feel the gentleness of concern hands and words.

I know I will be okay. I love you my dear love.

                     Coyote/John Castellenas


© 2015 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
Beautiful photo create amazing poetry.

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A beautiful way to portray how each of us feel so protected, cocooned when we are in love. A picture does speak a thousand words, put beautiful poetry speaks even more. :)
Good one John

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

Thank you Annie. I appreciate the comment.
I agree, this picture would bring a poem to mind and you have done this beautifully. Valentine

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

I did like the photo. Allowed me to feel the emotion. Best days when we can show weakness and sadnes.. read more
Valentine

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome. Kathie
A picture and a poem created, is something new I have come across. Thank you for this innovation (if I could say this way) and for your writing! Beautiful captivating words. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

Thank you Madhu. I was taught this set-up by a talented writer 12 years ago. I believe artwork can e.. read more
Madhu

10 Years Ago

Yeah, it's pretty amazing! :)
A medieval scenery to match maybe an unrequited love by the picture. If I'm wrong I still loved this piece of yearning and and the magic.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

Just a Tumblr photo. Had the feel of a more classic day. Thank you Andrew for reading and the commen.. read more
When one finds true love, it's like two people merging into one. And a face on a lap in an embrace feels just right for once. Full of love and support, tenderness and passion. That was a beautiful tribute to a beautiful picture and love.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nadia Gerassimenko

10 Years Ago

And what is weakness is actually strength. The strongest open their hearts and love. The weakest kee.. read more
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

I agree. I have been reading your poetry book. It is very good dear Poet.
Nadia Gerassimenko

10 Years Ago

Really? I am so happy you like it! *HUGS*
Great truths in this piece!
In just a few lines you really sum up the importance
of having your special someone there to help when
the going gets tough! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Short and truthful. Another great write from Coyote! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

Thank you Emily. I appreciate the comment Emily.

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