I
brought you your coffee. I don’t speak to you till the coffee kicked
in.You stand nude barely wrapped in a cotton sweater allowing the
morning sun to warm your tender skin and face. You asked me. What are
your planned for me today? I whispered as I wrapped my arms around you
and I say. I want us to lay in bed all days. Write poetry together and
allow Lana Del Rey and Taylor Monsen voices to take us away to better
places and thoughts. You give me a willing smile and with a wink, accepted
my offer as we wandered back to soft sheets and warm blankets.
hmmm.. lana del rey has a soothing voice ,she usually attempts dark songs. Indeed I like her music but only re mixes .
Taylor Monsen ummm.. taylor swift isn't a bad option though ha ha. . just kidding.
A nice write, a lovely work John.
I enjoyed the read .
Spidey. ..
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Taylor Swift is okay. Taylor Monsen had my old rock and roll songs feel. Thank you for reading and t.. read moreTaylor Swift is okay. Taylor Monsen had my old rock and roll songs feel. Thank you for reading and the comment.
I really enjoyed how you found such a place of peace and serenity.
God Vibes.
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Need good places and good coffee. Leave us with good memories. Thank you for reading and the comment.. read moreNeed good places and good coffee. Leave us with good memories. Thank you for reading and the comment.
Whew, and all I have to life on is the memory of those blissful days. Oh, and the coffee was good too. Valentine
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Good coffee and good company. The best days of our life. Thank you dear friend for reading and the c.. read moreGood coffee and good company. The best days of our life. Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment.
Ahhhh....staying in bed all day with the one you love...or lust...listening to good music and writing poetry. Quite the fantasy. Not sure if the photo inspired it or if you found the photo after writing the words, but either way, you set the scene and bring us to it wonderfully. Lydi**
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Thank you Lydia. We need many mornings where we have the warmth of the soft bed and good company.
I like the sound of that! Forgetting responsibilities and stress. Leaving it all out the door and just coming back to bed and laying there all day long in warm sheets, listening to inspiring muses (I love Lana!), and making beautiful cooperative and collaborative work. Coffee definitely helps! Haha. Loved this!
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Thank you Nadia for reading and the comment. I like the band "Pretty Reckless". Taylor Monsen had a .. read moreThank you Nadia for reading and the comment. I like the band "Pretty Reckless". Taylor Monsen had a good sound and song too.
Nice work John. This ones one of your lighter peaces I guess, its so effortless in its description and very engaging for the reader due to the chemistry you've created..
Great job
hmmm.. lana del rey has a soothing voice ,she usually attempts dark songs. Indeed I like her music but only re mixes .
Taylor Monsen ummm.. taylor swift isn't a bad option though ha ha. . just kidding.
A nice write, a lovely work John.
I enjoyed the read .
Spidey. ..
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Taylor Swift is okay. Taylor Monsen had my old rock and roll songs feel. Thank you for reading and t.. read moreTaylor Swift is okay. Taylor Monsen had my old rock and roll songs feel. Thank you for reading and the comment.
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words.
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