Attempt at nine letter poetry.
A Poem by
Coyote Poetry
Hard to create powerful poetry using minimum words.
Kiss
Elixir of kiss.
Love was young.
You were perfect.
Mistress
Mistress love.
Veil revealed.
Perfection remembered.
Vision
Noble vision.
Delicious nymph.
Treasured memory.
Harmony
Harming of dance.
Amorous emotion alive.
Blushing beauty delight.
Body
Fragrant of body.
Tracing of skin.
Falling into perfection.
Coyote/John Castellenas
© 2014 Coyote Poetry
Author's Note
New poetry. I hope you enjoy.
Reviews
Wow this was electrifying. It may be a challenge to express depth within limits, but you did it quite flawlessly. Thank you for sharing.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you. I appreciate the comment.
This has incredibly unique rhythm. It's mystical but bold. I really enjoyed it.
Posted 10 Years Ago
This has incredibly unique rhythm. It's mystical but bold. I really enjoyed it.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Ty for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
A poem muc h appreciated and enjoyed. For me the first two stanzas were unforgettable.
Posted 10 Years Ago
A poem muc h appreciated and enjoyed. For me the first two stanzas were unforgettable.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Divya. I appreciate the comment.
Amazing expression of words. I liked it.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Amazing expression of words. I liked it.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Barb. I appreciate the comment.
10 Years Ago
You're welcome
The lack of words don't fail to express the emotion you wanted to put across. I think that's an amazing try, and I liked it.
Posted 10 Years Ago
The lack of words don't fail to express the emotion you wanted to put across. I think that's an amazing try, and I liked it.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you. I was told. I write only epic. Trying to downsize.
A beautiful rendition of a poem great choice of words
Posted 10 Years Ago
A beautiful rendition of a poem great choice of words
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Tate. I appreciate the positive comment.
what is said in less, is often more....this is more...tightly wound together and powerful...
all could stand on their own as little poems, but they thread together nicely as a whole.
Posted 10 Years Ago
what is said in less, is often more....this is more...tightly wound together and powerful...
all could stand on their own as little poems, but they thread together nicely as a whole.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Jacob. I wanted to try something new. Test my old mind.
Wow, a departure for you, but still it retains the shape and feel of your emotional tomes. I am so impressed. Glad I saw it in the feed.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Wow, a departure for you, but still it retains the shape and feel of your emotional tomes. I am so impressed. Glad I saw it in the feed.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you. The epic Poet trying less words.
There's a touch of tradition of this, John .. a bit of Bill Shakespeare magicked by our preciously romantic Coyote Poetry! Tis a very fine piece of writing but, very much you, especially in the final stanza.
Posted 10 Years Ago
There's a touch of tradition of this, John .. a bit of Bill Shakespeare magicked by our preciously romantic Coyote Poetry! Tis a very fine piece of writing but, very much you, especially in the final stanza.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Emma Joy. I appreciate the kind words.
It is difficult to write using only a few words, and yet you did this perfectly in this romantic, sensual little gem. Beautiful poetry my friend
:) Julie
Posted 10 Years Ago
It is difficult to write using only a few words, and yet you did this perfectly in this romantic, sensual little gem. Beautiful poetry my friend
:) Julie
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Julie. Trying to expand how I use words.
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