Fairytale ending

Sometime life is fair. We can have a fairytale ending when all things fall into place properly.

                        Fairytale ending

Love letters are sent.
New hope is born.
Sweet Julie wrote.
I need you here.
I want our old times to become our new times.

Sweet words written on paper make a sad heart content.
"I love you more than you will know."
Words can lead us to hell and paradise.
I learn good things come to the people who wait.

My bags are packed and  I'm waiting for the train for Frankfort.
Soon I will return to her.
I hold the letter in my hands.
I wish for a fairytale ending.

Where love conquers all.
Where all things fall into place.

Sweet and beautiful Julie is waiting.
I hope she loved the stranger I have become.
Love is tender. Easily broken.

I find my Julie In Ann Arbor, Michigan.
She wrapped her arms around me.
I smell the sweetness of her perfume.
I feel the warmth of her embrace.
She gives me gentle, kind smile.

She whispered.
"We will be okay my love."

                         Coyote

Author's Note

A short poem. Trying to be less epic.

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

What an awesome job you did, Coyote ... I read your this poem and now what am seeeing that you're reaching out ..your growing too in writing's field. I loved this poem, what a great poem. I don't know it's really a fairytale or not.. but I've watched some real moments through your poem... This's called true love where the simplicity of love always comes with the scent of some warmness.. with some beauty of love. I enjoyed reading the poem. Thanks for writing such a nice and a brilliant piece, frnd ... I do appreciate that you shared your this beautiful piece on cafe's site. Thanks for that ... and well done for your great poem. Lovely poem i've ever read.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. You are very kind. Just a poem for a good memory.

[Kenaz]

Your poems are consistently moving. It is sad that being away for too long changes every thing; even unconditional love has a condition of proximity.

I see some things that can be easily fixed:
L1: "Love Letters are sent."
L14: "Where love conquers all"
L17: "Easily broken"
L22: "She gives me a gentle, kind smile"

Thank you for your beautiful words

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the help and reading. I do appreciate.

[Adambomb]

Amazing how much I relate to this. I am currently a student at the University of Michigan in Ann Arbor and my girlfriend and I have been sending letters back and forth all year. The connection we have through expressing ourselves in written word is strong and touching, but the "stranger" feeling is also very present each time we visit. Your poem touches me deeply. Thank you very much!

[Coyote Poetry]

Letters are the way to maintain contact. Nice to hold words of someone missed in your hands. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[A. Garcia Sagarra]

Loved it! Hope that really happended...

[Coyote Poetry]

It did. But two lives went in different direction. Julie is a nurse in Chicago and i rejoin the Army to fight my demons. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Oh, this is romantic, CP. A fairy tale ending...Wish that could happen to all couples who really love each other.

Nice poetry.

[Coyote Poetry]

Would be nice to have fairytale ending. Would be a better world. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're welcome.

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

I liked this. Short and sweet but very deep. You presented a very nice story.

"I hope she loved the stranger I have become." - This line alone brought out a lot of emotion for me.

Thank you for sharing!

[Coyote Poetry]

People change. Sometime not for the better. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Lydia Shutter]

Awwww...such a romantic tale you have woven for us. Sometimes love CAN conquer all, no doubt about it. such a sweet happy ending. You have touched on all the senses with the splendid imagery in this poem. I enjoyed it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lydia for reading and the kind words.

[Sami Khalil]

A very sweet and lovely romance poem. Softly whispering in the breeze of Ann Arbor...:).............

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sami for reading and the comment.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)...........

[Prritiy]

She whispered.
"We will be okay my love."

loved this simple sweet fairytale ending, a wish every one wishes to come true.
Pray it does also for you.

best wishes

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. She was a comfort 34 years ago. She is a nurse in Chicago. I ended up changing my life and purpose many times.

[Prritiy]

yes i remember you told this earlier in poem too. and now you have changed for good :)

best wishes

[Coyote Poetry]

A wise person don't repeat mistakes. We learn by trial and error. With love. We need to walk softly and never be negative to the people we love.

[Prritiy]

that true :)

best wishes