Sanctuaries of the sweet kiss and embrace

Best days of a life. When love is being born.

                               Sanctuaries of the sweet kiss and embrace.

My beautiful enchantress. It is a moonless night.
The gentle lights of the soft candles allowed my eyes to be entrapped
in the view of your womanly curves.

You entice me with a smile and a whisper "Come near my Johnnie."
You watch my face blush overwhelm by the sacred sight of a amourous maiden.

I hesitate knowing to harvest the vision of tender feet, long legs, soft breast and beautiful face.
Your laughing eyes blue eyes make me smile. A woman know to make a man wait. A wise man
know to seize the moment.

To ensure to travel the soft and tender skin of a maiden slow and easy. Learning and knowing every curve
and mark upon the ocean of her body. A rare view given to men by kind and beautiful woman.

My enchantress raises up off the soft bed. Her body looking erotic and tempting by the glow
reflecting by the light of the soft lights given by the candles. Fire red hair, soft breast moving and soft hands offering the paradise of tender skin and sweet kisses.

I hold the hands of my love and  I kiss her sweet lips. I hesitate and tell her. "I desire to put lotion of lavender
 upon you from feet to soft shoulders. I want to touch and adore your body from feet to sweet lips. To know you like I know my path to my home."

My temptress smile and laughed. She whispered to me in a voice sweeter than honey. "I look forward to this
my lover. Love is fair. I will allow you to feel and touch all my secret places. The sanctuaries of lovers is fair. I must return the favor."

I smiled and whispered to my love.

"The night is young.
Sweet bliss need to be built upon.
Dear enchantress allow the mercy of the night
for us to learn to swim in the passion.

The moonless night tell no secrets.
True lovers can find paradise of love without fear.
To allow the heart to be fearless and alive.

The sweet dance of desire lead us to places
where lovers learn to appreciate the sweet kisses and warm embrace.

Two lover fall together.
Words are not needed anymore.
The sanctuaries of the sweet kiss and embrace allowed us to know.
We have lived and loved once.

                             Coyote




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Author's Note

Finally a new poem. I don't like the flow of tenses. Please help a old man. Never too old to learn.

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

maybe the flow isn't quite right but this is a lovely poem written from the heart and not forced in anyway, and yes where there is true love the words do not have to be spoken ..they are felt.very much enjoyed my friend.. top marks

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Stella. I wrote words that came from memories and the reading of Milton and Dryden.

[Dhaye]

I like this poem. It doesn't look erotic for me. You have chosen the right words to make it sound wholesome anyway.
The last verse is perfect especially this line: "Words are not needed anymore." Indeed, being with someone you love is enough...no word is needed to express the love.
Awesome!

[Coyote Poetry]

When I write. I like to keep PG. Better to make the reader imagination go to work than to describe every detail. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Great Aunt Astri]

Do you know why I think this poem works so well? Although it is 'erotic' it is matter of fact. Instead of going overboard with emotion you give a rich soliloquay in a very down to earth way. The reader can add his imagination!!!! As for the flow of tenses, well, it seems to 'go with the flow' of the poem. You could try to write a more concise version, but it would be a differnt type of poem.
I liked it very much, without feeling I was a voyeur!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I believe better to allow the reader to use their imagination. Most of us understand the dance of love. Real beauty is when two people find pleasure in each other arms.

[Great Aunt Astri]

Absolutely, the imagination is much better than graphic description when it comes to love making. As you say most of us understand 'the dance of love'!

[EMMIE]

Beautifully written! I always look to give some type of constrictive criticism, but this poem is so perfect, I just have nothing to criticize. I love it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Emmie for the kind words. I was reading some John Milton all day yesterday. His words gave me motivation to write tonight.

[EMMIE]

Ah, John Milton! Of course...always a good read.

[Lydia Shutter]

The velvety romance and the intense desire in every line of this is splendid. To think of having lotion rubbed from head to toe....ahhhhh! An enchanting sensual adventure. Wonderful work. Lydi**

[Quill~]

Your enchantress is mesmerizing, and so it this mystical write.
It's amazing to swim in passion.Very romantic!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Quill. The dances of love need to be long and sweet. Need to appreciated the kind gifts when given.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Nice to see you bringing out your romantic side. A very sweet and sensitive poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. Good to see you alive and well. I hope all is well with you and the family.